In a Grave

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Summary: The Earl questions the Noahs in an attempt to find out who broke the rule "No killing in the house" and buried a Finder in the garden.
Prompt: 13. Honest
Rating: PG-13 for death and violence

Comments

[harmony283]

phff...that was amusing XD *especially likes Devits part* Though I didn't exactly expect Skinn to talk in the way he did (almost confused him for someone else, until the mentioning of baked cookies)

...and of course only Lulu gets off XD great job though~

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Devit's POV is a lot of fun.

Skinn seems pretty calm when he's not possessed by rage, and I also think he's smarter than people give him credit for. So he ends up with a relatively "normal" character voice, like Tiki but without the cocky charm. I looked at that part again and added a distinctive part in the first paragraph, though, since it did take to long for his identity to be apparent. It annoys me when fic writers are coy about telling readers who they're talking about. Also I fixed some typos.

Lulu was the only one who wasn't implicated by suspicious evidence and a questionable testimony. XD

Thanks for reading!

[cretiasxp]

Haha! Yeah, had to agree with the Earl on this one...Lulu is the only absolutely innocent suspect. xD Even if the others are being punished for more side-crimes, like Tyki for staining the house in a different way and Skin with the Akuma...

Rhode and Tyki's POV were especially funny to read (though the result of Tyki's "date" was rather gruesome...) and the childishness of Jasdero and Debito (suspect 2.5, rofl!).

Very enjoyable piece. ^_^

[symbolism_egg]

Yes. XD The Earl can tell who's guilty, even if it's not clear who was guilty of what.

Tiki's a Noah, after all, so his dates might not all come to good ends.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[grenadeobat]

I should have read this earlier! You and your amazing writing. ;u; I love your portrayal of the characters.

[symbolism_egg]

Aww, thanks! :'D

Read anytime. <3

lmao

[rasshield]

This is one is by far one of my favest. Don't ask why... but I'll care to explain *shifty eyes* - the way you are able to portrait each of the Noah's psyche is one of the things I like most in your writings (it shows that you really love'em the way they are, while other people may bias or "hyperbolize" traits that confuses the satire and the parody with the crack, making'em too dense to palate).

I'm keeping it for my collection of "Noah Tales" (you comprise the most of my fictional collection, perhaps because I'm lazy to go to a fanfic database and search and threshing the 90% of yaoi fics about the Noah from that 10% that are actually normal tales with more or less skill at writing). Not my fault that I like yours moar.

Also, I'm trying to not reply too much, because it is hard for me to stop when I'm started, and because it might flood your inbox unnecessarily.

Re: lmao

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Heh, glad you enjoyed, and thanks for your comment. <333 I do love the Noahs just as they are, and although at times I exaggerate for humorous purposes, I try not to forget the various aspects of their personalities.

If you're looking for more good Noah fics, I've come across some nice gen/parody fics I can recommend. I can dig them up and note you if you'd like. They are few and far between, though. *shakes fist and curses Tyki/Exorcist-boy pairings* I ended up writing the kind of Noah fics I wanted to read. XD And I'm so happy when others enjoy them, too.

*coughs and shoves own yaoi fics all several of them under bed with foot* I treasure every comment. <3 Reply as much or as little as you want!

Your...your icon...half of me wants to salute it, but...;A;

Re: lmao

[rasshield]

You can freely share URLs and any other bookmarks with me, whenever you get a pinch of free spare time.

And it is true the saying "If they cannot satisfy you, do it yourself." xD It always ends in worthwhile creativity spurts.

*tilts up a brow but ignores that surreptitious movement*

You don't need to ;) I use Levvie to put people nervous and do some acting, but actually nothing too compromising

*clicks vertebrae and goes to rest*

Sometimes when using this colourful eiderdown comforter, I imagine how is to rest in a futon. So cold in here despite it's tropical-esque vantage *= =*

Re: lmao

[symbolism_egg]

All right, I'll put that on my to-do list. :) It's time I collected a list of my faves in one place and shared 'em with somebody.

*whistles innocently*

Ah, I was going to ask why that icon. It worked in making *me* nervous. XD Also, I feel I must reply with either my Link icon or the psychotic-looking twins.

Futons are pretty nice. Very convenient. I hope it gets warmer for you.