and the stuff of unspeakable nightmares - I laughed at "stuff"
I feel the last line was the best out of this one
Hm, the first and second paragraph seems to need a bit more of a 'flow', or 'direction', but it could be one of those randmon thought jots you do. I see where you are heading with this, but I think it could be more....punctual.
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I feel the last line was the best out of this one
Hm, the first and second paragraph seems to need a bit more of a 'flow', or 'direction', but it could be one of those randmon thought jots you do. I see where you are heading with this, but I think it could be more....punctual.
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