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synecdoche

chuck fic: i think i see a glimmer

Jun 15, 2009 13:35

i think i see a glimmer

Without him in it, Chuck's room emerges as a new landscape. chuck/sarah, pg, 1070 words. spoilers for chuck vs. the ring.

[This was my first venture into Chuck fic and what can I say, I really liked it. I know this is short but I'm hoping to write more soon. I hope you enjoy! ♥]

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chuck/sarah, chuck fic

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synecdoche June 16 2009, 16:28:37 UTC

Thanks so much! It was my first Chuck fic, and I kept worrying about keeping Sarah in character... I'm so glad you enjoyed. ♥

ndnickerson June 15 2009, 18:29:36 UTC

that was great! i really enjoyed it. =)

synecdoche June 16 2009, 16:29:10 UTC

Thanks so much! It was my first Chuck fic, so it was pretty nerve-wracking to write. I'm so happy that you liked it. ♥

dazzlebug June 15 2009, 18:36:42 UTC

Oh this is just gorgeous. I love snapshot fic but few writers do it justice. This is a real gem. Bravo!

synecdoche June 16 2009, 16:30:00 UTC

Thanks!! I worried a lot while writing this -- Sarah is surprisingly hard to write -- and it makes me so happy that you enjoyed it. ♥

sinemoras09 June 16 2009, 00:09:58 UTC

omg. This was just so well-written...I love the details in this, the ten little indents in the comforter, Sarah watching Chuck brushing his teeth and her feeling so lost. The writing is sparse but incredibly evocative, there isn't a single word out of place. Beautifully done!

+mem :)

synecdoche June 16 2009, 16:30:49 UTC

Thanks so much! I took a creative writing class this past semester that focused a lot on describing place, so now I'm a little obsessed with it... I'm so glad you enjoyed. ♥

mikki13 June 16 2009, 01:56:28 UTC

That was absolutely excellent. You said so much with so few words; I felt as if I was watching it play out in front of me. I love that at the very end, she simply stops protesting and forgets to care. It's just so Sarah. Great work!

synecdoche June 16 2009, 16:31:37 UTC

Thanks so much! I kept worrying that Sarah, especially, would seem out of character, so you have no idea how happy this comment makes me. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed. ♥

mikki13 June 18 2009, 04:05:31 UTC

Sarah can be a difficult character to capture, but you did very well. I'm looking forward to reading more from you!

synecdoche June 18 2009, 04:08:44 UTC

I'm actually working on another Chuck fic that's AU for the end of the finale... It's turning out to be pretty epic, but hopefully I'll be done within the week. ♥

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