chuck fic: something like gesture

[synecdoche]

something like gesture

Why does she keep forgetting he’s an operative? Sarah's caught between choices, and she'll go down fighting, always.
chuch/sarah, sarah/shaw, casey/ilsa. pg-13. 2965 words.
for the amazing innie_darling because she won my help_haiti auction. ♥

Comments

[lovablemess]

Wonderfully done. You captured Sarah's heartbreak as well as her hesitance very well.

[synecdoche]

Thanks! I have a lot of fun writing Sarah, and I'm really glad she worked for you here. ♥

[synecdoche]

Thanks! I feel like at this point in the season things can be tricky to navigate, so I'm really glad it worked for you. &heartsl

[innie_darling]

Apologies - my laptop died a violent death on Friday night, so I've been sneaking lj from work in dribs and drabs.

ANYWAY. This is exactly what I wanted - Sarah is one of those rare characters who somehow makes you aware that there's so much more she's not letting you in on - and here you've given us all the ways her mind works, how her heart breaks, everything. Really gorgeous. Thank you so much!

[synecdoche]

I'm so glad you liked!! I was really hoping you would, and I'm really really glad you enjoyed! ♥
It was fun to write -- to be honest, I'm pretty sure there's going to be a sequel.
I hope your laptop gets better soon!

[ohlookshiny]

This is the moment all of his smiles have been leading up to, the next extension of that sunlit motel room where they hadn’t been exposed but rather illuminated. This is a route she can’t run, one she would have to walk, one slow step at a time.

PERFECTION. plus, I love how you captured the essence of Sarah, of her quietness and hesitance.