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synecdoche

community fic: gardens under the rain (1/2)

Mar 23, 2010 15:47

gardens under the rain (1/2)

it hits her, the feeling of his lips against hers, the tang of victory sliding against the texture of his tongue
jeff/annie, a little bit of jeff/britta. pg. 1867 words.

( it sneaks up on her at weird moments )

community fic

Comments 16

timebomb March 23 2010, 20:28:11 UTC

nice! i was so distracted by this, i missed at least five/ten minutes of class!

synecdoche March 24 2010, 21:20:16 UTC

Thanks -- I'm sorry you missed class, though! ♥

stitchesofgold March 23 2010, 20:29:33 UTC

This is AMAZING! I cannot wait to read the second part. :D

synecdoche March 24 2010, 21:21:41 UTC

Thanks! I'm working on the second part; my goal is to get it up on Friday afternoon. I'm glad you enjoyed! :)

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synecdoche March 24 2010, 21:22:25 UTC

Thanks so much!! There are so many different voices on Community, I was worried, and I'm glad it worked for you. ♥

dearygirl March 23 2010, 23:34:09 UTC

This is lovely. I'm so glad there will be more.

synecdoche March 24 2010, 21:23:01 UTC

Thanks so much! There should be more on Friday. ♥

citykeptblinkin March 24 2010, 01:49:12 UTC

i really like the style of this piece, just the way the words flow. and you did an especially great job with vaughn.

synecdoche March 24 2010, 21:24:20 UTC

Thanks so much! Weirdly I have a particularly Vaughn-like friend; when I got to his first episode there was this weird moment of recognition during his green tea speech. I'm glad you enjoyed. ♥

(By the way, your icon is amazing!!)