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synecdoche

community fic: gardens under the rain (2/2)

Mar 26, 2010 10:51

gardens under the rain (2/2)

“Annie. Think about it. This is me. Would I ask you out again just to make you feel okay?”
jeff/annie. pg-13. 3096 words.

(Thanks so much to everybody for all the lovely comments! If you missed it, you can read part one here.)

( a breeze ruffles annie’s hair as she waits for the light )

community fic

Comments 19

unnecessary_ March 26 2010, 15:11:43 UTC

Lovely. :)

synecdoche March 29 2010, 15:23:34 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed ♥

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synecdoche March 29 2010, 15:24:04 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm really glad you liked it. ♥

0penhearts March 26 2010, 18:45:01 UTC

HOW did I not comment on the first part of this? Because upon completing THIS part, I whooped in approval because it was GORGEOUS. Oh, that whole last little snippet absolutely killed me. Beautiful.

synecdoche March 29 2010, 15:24:42 UTC

Thanks so much! It was fun to write; I'm really glad you enjoyed. The last part was in my head throughout, so I'm especially glad it worked ♥

dearygirl March 26 2010, 20:43:31 UTC

I really don't know what else to say other than, this fic brings me happiness.

synecdoche March 29 2010, 15:25:01 UTC

Aww, thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed ♥

nakannalee March 26 2010, 21:27:00 UTC

This was all so perfect and in the moment. Your details were fantastic. And I like how you were able to bring up their little quirks and personal issues without getting uber sappy or angsty.

In a word: perfect.
In another word: yay.

Thanks so much for such a sweet read! :) *mems*

synecdoche March 29 2010, 15:25:49 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm really glad it worked for you; it's always nerve-wracking to write in a new fandom. ♥