parks & rec fic: next stop, the world (5/11)

Jun 06, 2011 17:20

next stop, the world [5/11]
Leslie/Ben, Chris/Ann, Andy/April
r (for this part). 4859 words.

He has probably never been a huger dork but also never so adorable. Even if she is temporarily blinded by ocean water. Leslie decides to run for office, antics ensue.

Note: So, this part is pretty long, partially because a lot happens, and also because I ( Read more... )

ann perkins, leslie knope, chris/ann, andy/april, leslie/ben, ben wyatt, parks & rec

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saucydiva June 7 2011, 03:38:26 UTC
"and as Chris settles himself into the chair he's selected, it hits him, all of a sudden, what he was feeling when he woke up this morning. He was feeling loneliness."

That is just beautiful and evocative.

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synecdoche June 8 2011, 00:33:15 UTC
Thanks! Chris's voice drove me crazy when I was writing this -- I kept feeling like it was over the top and then realizing, wait, that's Chris. So. It makes me really glad that it worked for you! :)

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saucydiva June 8 2011, 02:50:34 UTC
And I feel like he is this guy who has been totally vilified, and everyone is all "Rob Lowe doesn't even fit in the show and Emmys and blah blah blah" but I trust the writers; I think they are leaving making him a bit of an outsider for a reason. I think one of my hopes for season four is that they explore the Ben/Chris friendship a bit more. I like your version of him!

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synecdoche June 8 2011, 18:02:49 UTC
Honestly, all the Chris!hate kinda mystifies me. I wasn't sure about him at first but I really do enjoy him now; I feel like he's the kind of character only Parks & Rec could pull off. I definitely agree with you, though, I want to know more about the Chris/Ben dynamic next season. :)

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ballroom_pink June 7 2011, 05:33:51 UTC
Lovely, lovely fic.
I don't know if it's because I've been watching (and rewatching) The Vicious Kind again lately but I think Ben would look great in a depression beard and that could work in future chapters as surely Leslie and Ben, both, would be depressed because they can't be together. Just a thought.

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synecdoche June 8 2011, 00:34:26 UTC
I am definitely not opposed to humoring you in this. ♥ (Although I started watching The Vicious Kind during the most stressful week of the semester, paused it to return later, and then returned to find that Netflix had taken it off instant play... Anyway.)
Thanks so much for reading!

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ballroom_pink June 8 2011, 06:24:33 UTC
I can't wait for the next installment.
Rent it. Sad Adam Scott is something to behold. He's sleep-deprived (I relate) and tries to be an ass and then feels bad and does it over and over again.

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synecdoche June 8 2011, 18:00:11 UTC
I just rented it via iTunes -- hopefully I'll have it in the next 12 hours or so? -- I'm really really excited to check it out :)

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fromahippie June 7 2011, 21:02:54 UTC
this fic is so so good. Thanks for writing this :D

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synecdoche June 8 2011, 00:39:43 UTC
You are so sweet! Honestly, this made my day ♥

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synecdoche June 8 2011, 00:42:05 UTC
I'm working on the next part, I promise!! It should be up in a few days ♥
I definitely see what you mean about Ann & Chris -- I think she needs to learn how to be herself in a relationship where she really likes the guy (which I honestly think is new for her with him) and honestly I like the possibility of them together (which might just be me), and I'm glad that even if you're not sure, you're along for the ride. (Sorry, I definitely didn't mean to ramble so much...)
Basically: thanks ♥

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synecdoche June 8 2011, 17:58:12 UTC
SORRY ♥♥
More coming soon :)

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