Chains of Fate (4/?)

[synergyfox]

Title: Chains of Fate (4/?)
Pairings: Gladiator!Cara/slavegirl!Kahlan, Domina!Denna/Richard, Domina!Denna/servant!Dahlia, Gladiator!Raina/Berdine, Gladiator!Chase/Emma, Garen/Dahlia
Rating: M
Warning: This chapter contains rape and graphic death.
Disclaimer: Most certainly not mine.
Summary: Denna has a gift for her best gladiator.

Previous chapters have

Comments

[synergyfox]

*pets thine head*

[synergyfox]

Don't worry, you'll love me fully soon enough. *shifts sleeves up to Confess* I mean... *shifty eyes*

XD

[jolo_65]

You already know my thoughts on this update but allow me to repeat myself ;P

Brilliant update...full of action, drama & emotion - all the good stuff ^_^

Cute moments between Cara & Kahlan - check;

Fiesty interaction, include sparks - check;

Violence, mix with horror - check;

Another Mord'Sith trying to make sense of all theses foreign feelings - check;

HBIC! superprotective Kahlan - BIG check!!!!!

As I said it pretty much has everything ...lol.

Poor Dahlia the whole scene was well written because you managed to convey the horror of what was happening without being overly graphic!!!

I like how you've written Garen and look forward to seeing how things develop between her & Dahlia and how they deal with the aftermath of the attack.

Cara just needs to accept she is just one big mushball where Kahlan is involved - evidenced by her loss of the big spoon position :D

Kahlan going all badass on Nass was awesome and look forward to seeing that outcome...

Thanks for continuing and look forward to more... Cheers

[synergyfox]

*flails and squees a little*

Lol, your epically long comments / reviews make me super duper happy, jesu.

I don't even know how to reply to that other than *bow*

[jolo_65]

Pffft...rookie :D ...lol

[synergyfox]

You wait. Juuuuuuust you wait Bwahahhahahahhahahaha.

[andrea_reisende]

"What did you do?"
"Justice."

Yes, that's Kahlan!

[synergyfox]

Bahaha, wait for more Kahlan.

[mayireadtoday]

I really like the backstory of Cara and Denna.

So there are confessors in this verse, interesting.

Some people are just stupid. Raping or attempting to rape members of an armed and dangerous household -- beyond stupid.

[synergyfox]

:D I'm glad you're enjoying it so far - the backstory is definitely fun to write.

Oh yes, there are Confessors in this verse and it will play a far larger roll.

Super stupid.

[meatisadelicacy]

oh damn! i can't believe he did that to dahlia. i mean, i can,because this is a spartacus verse and everything is heartbreaking, but poor dahlia!

[synergyfox]

Baha, I know right? It's all heart break is expected of course but still *thwack thwack* Bad Nass.