I really REALLY enjoyed this chapter. The whole thing feeling like it was writhing under me. Sultry, sweaty, and desperately in love. I liked the way you cahracterized Mikey the most. The dynamic between Kid Kobra and Mikey Way and how it wa expressed in the choking scene was amazing! Mikey actually has said in real life that Kid has a short fuse. WHY DOESN'T ANYONE TALK ABOUT THIS? He's quick-tempered and super dangerous. Thank you for putting him in this character. And SHOW PONY! Let's talk about his adorable, flirty face. His character is spot-on, and I love you eternally for that. They share the closest thing to love that can be found in this universe. Thank you both for inventing the DUNE universe. YOU GUYS ARE GIVING ME FEELINGS. THEY RESEMBLE A CORONARY. ♥ ♥ ♥
I just. Wow I fucking loved this! I have so much glee now :D Mikeyway and Kobra Kid, I love how you characterized them so well. I love that Mikey admits to indulging his violent side and lets Kobra come out to play. That choking scene was brilliantly written (and hot). I really don't know what else to say, I think he's amazing :D <3
Also Show Pony freaking Ray out and his dancing, I could see it all playing out in front of me. It was amazing.
I love this series! I can't wait for the next piece ;P
There’s just something insanely comforting to know that even in this fucked up world there’s still some hope for a slight normality. Even if it does wear a thong on the outside of its tights.
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I really REALLY enjoyed this chapter. The whole thing feeling like it was writhing under me. Sultry, sweaty, and desperately in love. I liked the way you cahracterized Mikey the most. The dynamic between Kid Kobra and Mikey Way and how it wa expressed in the choking scene was amazing!
Mikey actually has said in real life that Kid has a short fuse. WHY DOESN'T ANYONE TALK ABOUT THIS? He's quick-tempered and super dangerous. Thank you for putting him in this character. And SHOW PONY! Let's talk about his adorable, flirty face. His character is spot-on, and I love you eternally for that. They share the closest thing to love that can be found in this universe. Thank you both for inventing the DUNE universe.
YOU GUYS ARE GIVING ME FEELINGS. THEY RESEMBLE A CORONARY. ♥ ♥ ♥
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Mikeyway and Kobra Kid, I love how you characterized them so well. I love that Mikey admits to indulging his violent side and lets Kobra come out to play. That choking scene was brilliantly written (and hot).
I really don't know what else to say, I think he's amazing :D <3
Also Show Pony freaking Ray out and his dancing, I could see it all playing out in front of me. It was amazing.
I love this series! I can't wait for the next piece ;P
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hott and that last bit, aw. this fic, man.
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