The Last Baker

Oct 30, 2008 12:39

Title: The Last Baker [18]
Author: shorthorror
Pairing: Brian Haner & Zachary Baker
Rating: NC-17
Summary: This beautiful asshole just came around and started ruining everything for me. I was the last Baker, and I'd promised my father our name would not die with me.Disclaimer: I am confident the readers can distinguish between what is real and what is fiction ( Read more... )

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Story anonymous November 6 2008, 05:58:43 UTC
I can already tell that you're a wonderful writer(I've only read this chapter)and I bet you've heard this...But DAMN your really good!XD

Also,I can tell you have consistency which is really hard to find(for unpublished writers)without the story getting off track or concentrating more on the subplot[s]. Great description without getting boring at most points. Still work on describing without so much heavy description.

But all in all really GREAT!XD

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