FMA fic: Desperate Causes

[syolen]

Title: Desperate Causes
Rating: PG
Series: Manga / Brotherhood
Summary: Winry didn't like the tone of Ed's voice. It sounded way too much like he was trying to hold back a chuckle.
Pairing: Ed/Winry.
Warning: (Slight) innuendo and very, very silly fluff.
Notes: This was written in 2009 and got lost under a pile of other drafts. Oops? ^^"

Comments

[evil_little_dog]

D'awwwww, this is so sweet!

(Where's my insulin shot?)

No, seriously, I love it. Ed teasing Winry; her wearing his t-shirt, 'desperate cause'.

So cute.

[syolen]

*gets insulin vial and needle ready*

Thank you! :D Ed can't be forever clueless around Winry even if she still has the upper hand!

[evil_little_dog]

*grits teeth*

No, he can't. Winry would get annoyed with him if he was forever clueless.

[syolen]

Thankfully for her, Ed is a fast learner!

[nebroadwe]

I like it that Winry doesn't let him get away with the smug overconfidence of the successfully coupled young male. :-) Give that boy an inch and he'll take Amestris.

[syolen]

No no no no, someone has to remind him of WHO is the boss! Winry will play, but there are limits! XD

Thank you for your comment!

[gaia_lulia]

Awwww.... I love seeing them comfortable with each other this way, but still giving each other shit.

[syolen]

They both have such tempers that it cannot simply be easy. They're just keeping things interesting, really. XD

Thank you for your comment!

[theothardus]

Ohhh~... Adorable. I loved the whole T-shirt factor, and the last line really pulled it all together. Wond~er~ful~

[syolen]

Hehe, thank you for your comment! I'm glad you liked it :)

[theothardus]

You're welcome! Yes, I very much did. ^-^

[yuukihikari]

awwww <3 Loved the mental image of Winry and her oversized shirt awkwardness and Ed has such a fantastic grin. I like how she turned the tables on him. Heh.

[syolen]

Seriously, that grin can be blinding. But Winry likes to remind him of who is the boss! XD
Thank you for your comment! I'm glad you liked it :)