All Is Fleeting, But All Is Good

Aug 02, 2011 20:55

 Title: All Is Fleeting, But All Is Good (Or: If You Give a Little Love, You Can Get a Little Love of Your Own)
Fandom: The Social Network
Characters: Eduardo/Mark.
Rating: T
Warnings: It may be confusing?
Spoilers: All of The Social Network.
Summary: The story of The Social Network and after, in a different way.
Notes: Written for the TSN-a-thon. Since I ( Read more... )

fandom: the social network, writing

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listentokelly August 3 2011, 07:31:49 UTC
:D Pretty! And really interesting. I noticed a typo though, near the beginning, Eduardo ignores Sean and it says complete, but should be completely :)

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syrika182 August 3 2011, 07:38:33 UTC
Thanks, Kelly.

Seriously, what would I do without you?

...suffer, probably. :D <3

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listentokelly August 3 2011, 07:57:05 UTC
Where are yooou in the chaaat? I'm all lonely and feeling like I'm dying from exhaustion.

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goldendoods August 4 2011, 14:03:26 UTC
Tara!! This was so good. I am crying shark tears. I can't tell if they are joyful or sad though.

But seriously, this was really sweet and also a very unique idea, and you carried it out well. I especially like this line: And the thread is spun and wound and the story begins to weave itself up, blue on white on Gap-hoodie gray and Bambi-eyed brown. It’s a good quilt to drape over their bed at the end of the night, a lifetime of regret and love later. So sweet! ♥

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salvadore_hart August 6 2011, 04:56:23 UTC
Oh the prose in this is so pretty. I love the overall tone, it's soft and wistful and just further shows how much more having can mean than never having at all (even and especially when it hurts.) Really, really beautiful.

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