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[sytzo4life]

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This life is liquid
Petrified
Glossy finish---
Terrified
My life is liquid
Beaches white
Tide tripping over
Liquid lives.

Comments

[sneakypeaky36]

Interesting juxtaposition of the life is liquid, petrified. Paradox? I don't know what to make of the periods at the beginning, but I accept it as a stylistic choice. Thought provoking.

[sytzo4life]

well the periods are actually accidental. i do that when im thinking. i was looking at the dots. the thoughts of the dots weren't connected to teh thoughts of the poem. however, an argument could be made to another end.