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[sytzo4life]

Goofy kid walks bouncing
Talking to no one
Under curious stares
Awkward grinning
Spinning seats
of spinning chairs

“Crazy kid” someone whispers
When he goes muttering
And fumbling by
He responds with a jittering
Chuckle
And everyone wonders
why.

Comments

[sneakypeaky36]

I like this one. On one instance because I relate to the goofy kid, on another instance because it doesn't just rely on alliteration to get a point across. I had to look up jittering. It is either an irregular movement or a nervous movement, but I assume that you knew that.

We are going to have some hardcore catching up to do once the summer comes. Hardcore.

[sytzo4life]

hardcore is an understatement

jittering is like the theme word of ths kid. if you knew him you would be like, omg totally.

everything he does could be described that way. i like the word. =)