Comments | syuan: "Tomorrow" part 2/2, K/S fic, Star Trek XI

syuan

"Tomorrow" part 2/2, K/S fic, Star Trek XI

Nov 23, 2009 17:31

Title: Tomorrow
Pairing: Kirk/Spock
Word count: 9,079... -ish
Genre: pre-slash, uh, adventure?
Summary: My response to this prompt posted on st_xi_kinkA/N: Sorry it took me so long to post the second part of the story. I'm working on my M.A. paper at the moment and because of a mess up at the University I had to re-write and re-think my whole paper. And it ( Read more... )

fanfiction: star trek xi, fanfiction, st_xi_meme

Comments 29

Well done! zagethe November 23 2009, 17:34:16 UTC

This was original and fun and I enjoyed it thoroughly.

Re: Well done! syuan November 24 2009, 19:13:47 UTC

Thank you. :)

talitha78 November 23 2009, 20:44:23 UTC

Great story! I enjoyed it very much.

syuan November 24 2009, 19:14:10 UTC

Yay! I'm happy you liked it.

captain_fine November 23 2009, 21:13:53 UTC

Yay! I'm so happy you continued this! I love all of the thought and detail that you put into exactly how Jim got stuck in the shields. Wonderful!

syuan November 24 2009, 19:26:28 UTC

Thinking of all those details gave me headaches and nightmares. :) Thank you. :)

danahid November 23 2009, 22:05:29 UTC

I was glad to see the conclusion to this story. I was intrigued by the prompt and found your solution to the problem it presented to be both interesting and satisfying. I also liked how well thought out your explanation was for where Jim was for a year. I loved Jim's ability to sense Spock's relief and hope at the end. Lovely.

syuan November 24 2009, 19:28:41 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you. :D

roadwaffle November 23 2009, 23:16:20 UTC

Ah I was waiting for you to continue this! It was worth the wait :)

I must say it is probably one of the most amazing pieces of fanfiction I have read recently. The story was truly captivating. And the small positive note it ended with was just perfect~

I really wish I knew how to say something that would count as a proper review, but... yeah, I fail. I'm sorry.

This story is so going to my rec list (when I finally will find the time to update it)

Thank you!

syuan November 24 2009, 19:36:05 UTC

For some reason I couldn't move their relationship to next stage, but I didn't want to leave them without a promise of something more, if you know what I mean. ;)

Yay! Rec list! First one in my 'fandom CV'. :P

Thank you.

roadwaffle November 28 2009, 17:24:54 UTC

It was really good even without the next stage. One can simply imagine themselves where and how things might have gone from there on :)

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