Comments | syusuke_kun31: Of Proposals, Mishaps & Acceptance [2/?]

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Of Proposals, Mishaps & Acceptance [2/?]

Jun 21, 2009 22:15

Title: Of Proposals, Mishaps & Acceptance
Author/Artist: me
Character(s) or Pairing(s): USxUK, may show other pairings soon though.
Rating: PG
Warnings: slash, cursing?(soon~), the fact that this is unBETA-ed (sorry >_Summary: In which America, within a span of five months, has already proposed to England ten times. Four of which backfires, three ( Read more... )

character/s: england, character/s: america, fandom: hetalia, character/s: all nations, charater/s: belarus, fanfic, pairing: us/uk

Comments 36

THIS lurkerperson June 21 2009, 14:43:58 UTC

OH BELARUS <3

yay, first comment P:

Re: THIS syusuke_kun31 June 21 2009, 21:48:57 UTC

~(*o*)~ Wooh~!! FIRST COMMENT! XD

Re: THIS lurkerperson June 23 2009, 10:38:16 UTC

YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHO THIS IS DO YOU

Re: THIS syusuke_kun31 June 23 2009, 14:02:39 UTC

I SO DO. *u* I'M WATCHING YOU.

Thread 6

tanya_tsuki June 21 2009, 14:46:39 UTC

Oh Belarus~
Didn't see that one coming...is she going to make America proposing to England even more difficult in the coming chapters?

syusuke_kun31 June 22 2009, 11:13:13 UTC

Maybe but most probably yeah though some chapters only~ :3

riiyacub June 21 2009, 15:56:22 UTC

Oh god, Belarus. WIN WIN WIN WIN. I love it. Belarussssss, you never fail to amuse me. I love Russia immediately fleeing. I wonder what England thought when he received such a phone call and then saw America's door broken down. And then Belarus.

The image of Belarus cradling America's head is kind of hot actually

syusuke_kun31 June 22 2009, 11:18:45 UTC

Belarus = Awesome-Creepy-<3 xD

England was like:
"What the bloody hell was that all about? And that scream..." Eyes widen. "Oh God... Alfred's in trouble!!" OAO

Broken door:
"Ru- oh hold on, he's with me... Then..." =A=''

Belarus:
OAO *inner flail* "Alfred m'boy!!!" \(>A<)/

Oh really? XDDDDDDD

riiyacub June 22 2009, 18:46:51 UTC

Heeeeeeeeeeee.

Poor England. Poor everyone. Even Russia must have pity for America now.

Yessss, it is. And Belarus crooning a lullaby or a love song to him

syusuke_kun31 June 23 2009, 14:06:43 UTC

Russia's kind of like torn between happiness and pity for America, actually. xD

While America shudders in fright which makes Belarus think that he's just shaking with happiness like what Russia claims Latvia does? XDDDD

Thread 8

allyoucaneater June 21 2009, 16:00:10 UTC

oh god Belarus ;w;
You did justice to her posessive creepiness. Russia's scared of her for a reason lol.

syusuke_kun31 June 22 2009, 11:21:09 UTC

Thank you~ >w<
I like her as much as I love Hungary and Liech~ The one thing that scares Russia should scare us all even more than the Ivan himself.. *shudders* XD

yokainomiko June 21 2009, 16:16:45 UTC

Oooh this was hilarious! I hope that you put more Belarus in as you go; I love her dearly! Does this count as a proposal that ends in confusion or that just backfires?

Take your time with writing, but your readers can't wait to read the next parts! (Well, at least I can't...)

syusuke_kun31 June 22 2009, 11:23:51 UTC

I think this would count more as a confusion because of Belarus but this is slightly backfires though more on the confusion so confusion it is! =D

I'll try~ :3

Thank you and I'm trying to get into the habit of updating every week so that I wouldn't not accidentally never update this again. ^^;;

Thank you very much~ XD Have a cookie! >w