[Fic] Understanding Love for white_ashes07 (Part 2)

[syuzuka_nhowy]

(Continued)

Fuji blinked his eyes as to adjust them to darkness.

“Speak. What is your name?”

Fuji gritted his teeth. He hated sorcerers with a vengeance.

“Fuji Syusuke.”

“For chivalry’s sake, my name is Tezuka Kunihiro. And I know you know what you are supposed to do.” He smirked.

‘Tezuka?’

“I do, sadly,” Fuji replied. From experience, Fuji knew

Comments

[white_ashes07]

I liked it! I really, really liked it. Contemplative, ne? Kinda reminds me of the line, "speak of love only when you've experienced it."

The way you fleshed out their characters was very effective, together with the different views on life and love, and it made the ending appear more life-changing for the both of them. It's like a person who doesn't think about love that much and a person who has seen too much of love's "bad side" are brought together to experience "the right kind of love" with each other. Did I get that right? And the subtle way you presented it made it even better.

Anyway, I think your TezuFuji version of Aladdin was wonderful. Thank you so much for the hard work!

And Ore-sama is love. ♥

[tacuma811]

I loved this fic! It's funny and cute and so good!!! ^___^
Before I read it I was wondering if it was possible to write a TezuFuji version of Aladdin, but it is really good! Well done!

[chibikaoruchan]

Woah... O_O the princess never showed up! XDDD

Loved it, the humor, the depths, the love, the caring. I only think the development was a little bit too fast... ^^

[syuzuka_nhowy]

It was... I had to cut some parts in the middle because it was getting so long... If you look closely, you'll actually see some inconsistencies with the time line...

Atobe was supposed to be the princess only he was in love with someone else^^

I had to slash out the OshiAto scenes that also contained some TeFu development...

nhowy<---is still grounded but manages to find the time to answer some questions...

[paranoid_fridge]

Wahhh... Kunihiro... *stares*
The way the story ended was awesome. From Kunihiro needing a sacrifice to Tezuka showing up on the scene and how things yet were twisted once again - I am officially awed. *bows*

And yay all the way for fairytale "happily ever after" TezuFuji ending. Plus your Ayana was great ^____^

[skysurf87]

Oh mine! I think this story is so lovely! :D