Saving Grace

Aug 04, 2008 06:54

Title: Saving Grace
Author: Syv
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Royai
Challenge: 30themesongs
Theme: Cry Over Spilt Milk
Theme Song: “Whiskey Lullabye” by Brad Paisley and Allison Krause
Disclaimer: I do not own FMA or any of the characters nor the song included in the story.
Word Count: 5 564
Note: This piece was inspired by the fic "Whisky Read more... )

fma:royai, literary:fanfic, 30themesongs

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cornerofmadness August 7 2008, 04:39:17 UTC
I enjoyed this

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syv_on_air August 7 2008, 13:21:29 UTC
Yay! I'm glad. Haha, I was so... robotic as I typed this. I was afraid there was something seriously wrong with it. -.- It needs editing, I know that much. I shall get around to it when I feel the muses coming back. XP I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless. :)

Much love! <3
Syv

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cornerofmadness August 7 2008, 14:08:58 UTC
yeah i know what it's like to have the muse go dim for a bit

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lastvesper August 7 2008, 20:08:46 UTC
Suicidal Riza's so sad. I could see Anime Riza doing that but not Manga Riza. They really are so different, in my opinion. That goes for Roy too.

I mostly write manga verse, but I've been nurturing a post movie fic idea for a while. Maybe one day I'll write it.

I like what havoc says about his superiors when at Gracia's it seemed well put, and I like the ending. I've heard that song too, it's really nice for this.

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syv_on_air August 8 2008, 16:02:27 UTC
Suicidal Riza's so sad.
I agree. It was depressing writing her that way, but my mind and fingers apparently move with or without my consent.

I could see Anime Riza doing that but not Manga Riza.
Unfortunately, I haven't read the manga, though I do plan to when I get around to it. XP

I like what havoc says about his superiors when at Gracia's it seemed well put, and I like the ending.
First of all, for Havoc, I must repeat that I had no idea it would turn out the way it did. I'm rather pleased with the result of the conversation though. XD And, I'm glad you liked the ending too. I thought it was... lacking, in every sense of the word, but that's neither here nor now, so, whatever. XP Lastly, I'm really glad you liked it. :)

Much love! <3
Syv

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lastvesper August 8 2008, 18:03:54 UTC
Oh, you have to read the manga.
If you like royai the manga is so much kinder to it, you learn all about Roy and Riza's history, and their are even subtle hints about a secret relationship n the latter chapters. It's delicious.

And aside from royai, I like the manga story line much better, it's vary developed.

I like Havoc, I think he's not as stupic as people make him out to be. He's sweet.

Oh, and do you want me to send you There Stands the Glass, and how do I do that?

tootles

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syv_on_air August 9 2008, 13:22:47 UTC
I know, I know. Practically everyone's told me to read the manga. I just haven't had the time lately, you know with school work and all.

I've already read "There Stands A Glass". I don't know if I commented on it, but yeah. :) And for your future reference, to link to something, you could use the html coding <,a href="url",>Name<,/a,> just minus the commas. :)

Much love! <3
Syv

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heiddles April 11 2009, 14:38:49 UTC
That was a really great story. Lately I've had quite a hunger for angst, and that definitely satisfied it. I look forward to reading more of your work! ^___^

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syv_on_air April 12 2009, 08:33:52 UTC
Thanks!!! I'm really glad you liked it. :) I'm only a fan of angst when it's got a happy ending. Go figure. ;)

< Syv

P.S. Squeeee~ I looooove your icon!!! <333 Me = fan of Riza. XD Permission to steal? XP

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heiddles April 12 2009, 08:51:57 UTC
Permission to steal granted! It's a wicked icon isn't it?

And I can't handle stories without happy endings. I'm a sucker for happy endings!!! =D

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syv_on_air April 12 2009, 09:29:35 UTC
Thanks for the icon. Yes, it is AWESOME! XD

Haha, if you have the time, maybe you could check out my other Royai fics? They aren't really angsty... I think? XP But I hope you enjoy them nonetheless. :)

Thanks again for the comment! It always makes me happy to know people are enjoying my stories. ;)

< Syv

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