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szaleniec1000

In This World and the Next Chapter 13

Jan 25, 2015 12:58

It took a while, but it's finally here. Here we learn exactly why Lord Potter (and by extension the author) thinks that Ron needs to be killed for something his future self did in another timeline. And it's as bad as you think it is.
( ITWATN Chapter 13 )

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sickbritkid2 January 28 2015, 00:20:44 UTC

Nobody's ever going to find out that Percy was fed to Fluffy by a dickhead, of course, because that might be an interesting source of conflict.

And this is ITWATN, where no one questions two ELEVEN YEAR-OLD CHILDREN BEING MARRIED!

szaleniec1000 January 28 2015, 08:04:09 UTC

You'd think that'd also get more attention than a single line of snark from Molly. There's no meaningful conflict in this fic.

sickbritkid2 January 28 2015, 00:22:38 UTC

She took Ginny on so she could raise her as the perfect wife for an arranged marriage for the sake of money and/or power;

Jog my memory: When did this happen?

szaleniec1000 January 28 2015, 08:04:33 UTC

After Lord Bellend took over the Burrow.

sickbritkid2 January 28 2015, 00:25:14 UTC

a multitude of muggle photographs, automatically taken of the students on various rides

Which would promptly be discarded by the students that were disappointed that they weren't moving. After all, this is fucking HOGWARTS and not a typical boarding school!

sickbritkid2 January 28 2015, 01:16:33 UTC

Taking their jobs and responsibilities seriously apparently means trolling a senior citizen who's concerned about her missing nephew.

It's like Robst wants to make all of the likeable Potter characters utter dipshits so that SCBE and his doormat will appear endearing.

szaleniec1000 January 28 2015, 08:05:09 UTC

It's quite an achievement to write Tonks and Remus in a scene with Muriel and have them come out as the bigger douches. Especially unintentionally.

sickbritkid2 January 28 2015, 01:23:04 UTC

A quick search of FF.net and AO3 tells me that Sirius/Charity is as rare a pairing as you'd expect.

You'd think two characters who are killed off in two entirely-different books, never interact with one another, and one of whom(Burbage) was introduced AFTER the other was killed off(Sirius) wouldn't be shipped together at all...

szaleniec1000 January 28 2015, 08:19:02 UTC

You underestimate the fandom that gave us Hogwarts/giant squid and Remus/tree.

sickbritkid2 January 28 2015, 09:41:42 UTC

I forgot about Hogwarts/Giant Squid. But Remus/Tree?

szaleniec1000 January 28 2015, 10:26:21 UTC

I've not read it, but it became a running gag on Potterfic Weekly.