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szaleniec1000

In This World and the Next Chapter 13

Jan 25, 2015 12:58

It took a while, but it's finally here. Here we learn exactly why Lord Potter (and by extension the author) thinks that Ron needs to be killed for something his future self did in another timeline. And it's as bad as you think it is.
( ITWATN Chapter 13 )

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sickbritkid2 January 28 2015, 01:32:48 UTC

Apparently, she hates that he has a cock.

So why isn't your "I HATE THAT YOU HAVE A COCK!" picture up for this chapter? Or, failing that, maybe a new picture designed to cater to ITWATN, like IHTYHAC was for Deserving?

szaleniec1000 January 28 2015, 08:20:46 UTC

I'm saving it for a later chapter. (Actually, I forgot. :p )

sickbritkid2 January 28 2015, 09:42:13 UTC

What about an ITWATN-specific icon?

sickbritkid2 January 28 2015, 01:33:50 UTC

Incidentally, Crawley (where ITWATN!Hermione is from)

Isn't Canon!Hermione from London, though?

szaleniec1000 January 28 2015, 08:56:30 UTC

I can't find a source on Hermione being from Crawley: it appears in a few fics, including one that mistakenly thinks that Crawley is in London, but from what I can tell she's just from London.

sickbritkid2 January 28 2015, 01:38:42 UTC

Luna and Ginny's reactions were also unknowns, the couple's story of having been friends since primary school wouldn't stand up to too much examination.

So, wait, are Luna and Ginny going to wind up together at the age of, like, 12?

Because if so, I'm going to pull over my bottle of Jameson before the HE flashbacks start.

sickbritkid2 January 28 2015, 01:39:49 UTC

Who the fuck is Steve? Isn't it generally a good idea to introduce someone before we hop into his POV in the middle of a scene?

Dear God, I've forgotten that Robst is almost as clumsy with the POV as Neil is...

szaleniec1000 January 28 2015, 08:56:46 UTC

If anything, he's even worse.

sickbritkid2 January 28 2015, 09:43:14 UTC

How so? Remember, Neil's POV shifts are quicker than the goddamn Golden Snitch...

sickbritkid2 January 28 2015, 01:43:04 UTC

Her voice was shaky as she spoke without turning around, "Harry, I don't know who I am anymore. What I just did is so out of character that I don't know what came over me!"

Then, almost as suddenly as she realized this, Hermione whipped out her wand and hexed Lord Bellend in the chest. She stood over him as his chest began to burst with tiny tentacles and Bat Bogies, her wand pointed right at his head.

"Alright, you obvious imposted-posing-as-my-best-friend," Hermione said, venom in her voice, "Where is Harry and what have you done with him!"