In This World and the Next Chapter 13

[szaleniec1000]

It took a while, but it's finally here. Here we learn exactly why Lord Potter (and by extension the author) thinks that Ron needs to be killed for something his future self did in another timeline. And it's as bad as you think it is.

Comments

[sickbritkid2]

Yes, of all the ways of setting the scene for Molly's trip to Egypt, the author went for "locals want to buy her with camels". I don't know why I'm even surprised at this point.

I hate this fic.

[sickbritkid2]

The Percy thing is all far too convenient. He had a thing for Penelope, depicted as though he was an inch short of killing her and having her stuffed and mounted, yet we're supposed to believe that this was going to develop into a real relationship in the other timeline. He just so happened to write it down in a way that would make it seem as though he'd run away in his grief. And Lord Potter knew none of this when he fed him to Fluffy. Meticulous planning!

[sickbritkid2]

They're going to find out that Percy is dead but think he had an accident or something when he "ran away", or (like Muriel) that the clock just so happened to break in a way that might imply that the missing person was dead. I just know it.

Goes to show how wearily predictable this fanfic is.

[undying_embers]

"But Arthur, we have to go back or at least I do! How can we sleep at night not knowing what happened to our son?"
Arthur was not for moving, "Our son who chose to run away over a stupid badge and a girl he hadn't even spoken to! We're barely managing here with the three of us working flat out. When you take in the expense of a trip home and hiring someone to replace you then I have to say no."

Wow, Arthur is almost as big a dick as Lord Dipshit. Even if they couldn't afford to go back to the UK, I don't think Arthur Weasley's first thought upon finding out that one of his sons is missing would be 'ugh, why does my idiot boy have to be such an inconvenience?'
And of course Molly needs her husband's permission to travel. Lovely.

[sickbritkid2]

How nice of Robst to show us the disgusting lifestyle that Lord Bellend forced the Weasleys into for absolutely no reason...

[woodenshy]

Okay...so...

War aside going on up there...oh boy.

Which do you guys think is worse: this or Hogwarts: Exposed? And yes, szaleniec, I'm reading that all the way from the beginning :P hence the question on chapter 16. *sigh* here I thought My Immortal was bad...now I think it's hilarious.

[greener221]

He's said a few times before that Hogwarts Exposed still remains more despicable. While ITWATN is sexist, projectionist, profane, implicating, dumb, senselessly character bashing, and just flat-out dumb and vile, HE is all of that, but with 10 times the words and written by a person that seems mentally incapable of waking up in the morning without jerking off to his desire to rape 10-year old girls to death. If you really want to understand Neil, look up "zeldaqueen the gang" on google.

[sickbritkid2]

*shudders*

I read her sporking of the first chapter of The Gang and couldn't go onward. I fear if I did, I would have to eat a gun out of sheer horror at that fic's depravity.

[greener221]

Neither could she. The spork ended up using a whole lot on snip-summary from Chapter 2 on. It's only natural when the fic spends 30+ paragraphs on the act of peeing in a cup.