Comments | szm: Fic - My Brother's Keeper

szm

Fic - My Brother's Keeper

Jul 12, 2012 23:08

Okay, yes, sequel to Bump in the Night. Which was only a prompt-fic, it just went and grew a bit of a backstory and Mycroft raised an eyebrow at me until I wrote his part of the backstory down. (Mycroft's raised eyebrow is nothing to be arguing with I assure you ( Read more... )

mycroft holmes, monster under the bed, gen, fiction, sherlock

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adrieunor July 13 2012, 05:44:56 UTC

Alright, so I just finished this one -- what fun! But I have to admit, it brought up a lot of questions that make me shiver because Mummy is still alive ...and she has power. And if her word is law and she told Mycroft to bring back Sherlock, that means that this verse can only get more and more interesting the longer both her sons stay Outside. I can see this becoming a possible conflict in the future for everyone and of course it just makes me want to see more of this verse -- what is their world like below? Do they all look like Sherlock? Would Sherlock take John?

So many questions. Do I even want them answer? I enjoy the mystery a lot too.

I love it. Thank you for the story!

szm July 13 2012, 13:13:01 UTC

Oooo Mummy is very much still alive and waiting - she's very, very good at that...

Should be some more of this 'verse, I like it too much to leave it.

Thank you very much for reading and for such a nice comment.

cccahill18 July 13 2012, 06:35:40 UTC

Very pleased to find out that there was a sequel to Bump in the Night :)
I like the world building for this monster-verse that you've touched on here. Very interesting indeed. It was also good to get more of a look at Sherlock's life after he left John and to see more of the family dynamic. Now, what's going to happen next? ;)

szm July 13 2012, 13:14:51 UTC

Ah, that would be telling... Very glad you enjoyed this, thnak you for reading it.

witch_in_winter July 16 2012, 03:36:50 UTC

It is said that clothes make the man...

I do like this 'verse, am glad that you are continuing on in it. Now what bed is Moriarty going to climb out from under?

szm August 1 2012, 12:56:20 UTC

Thank you very much, there is another one of these in the works. But who said Moriarty was a monster...

lrodell July 29 2012, 20:07:28 UTC

Just drank both stories down; what a very interesting world! Thank you very much for sharing it!

szm August 1 2012, 12:58:36 UTC

Thank you very much for reading it! There should be some more in a little while.

julnyes October 11 2012, 20:22:59 UTC

A fantastic sequel and a very interesting world.