{FIC} Behind the Closed Door (Chapter 1/?)

Sep 25, 2010 14:21

Title: {FIC} Behind the Closed Door (Chapter 1)
Author: Teza
Rating: PG-15
Warning: Jonghyun centric, cursing, un-betaed, amateur writings.
Summary: Jonghyun is a straight guy who was really pissed at the lovey-dovey act Key and Onew showed him everyday. So he tried to give them some lesson. Or may be just scold them abit.

PROLOGUE

“But, Jonghyun.. My heart would explode without Key’s touch.” )

pairing:onkey, rating:pg-15, fanfiction

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suika_fudo September 25 2010, 12:06:22 UTC
Jjong...don't be scare...key still have place for his bestfriend in his heart...

Can't wait to find onkey doing another thing...hehehe

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t3z4_b3rry2 September 25 2010, 18:41:58 UTC
Yeah.. I hope key do have a little space left for Jonghyun. >,<

wahahaha~ you have to wait me staying up late again. :D

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mankadi September 25 2010, 20:18:43 UTC
awwww~ i cant understand jonghyun side~
but it was just lol ;x
dunno but i loled a bit :xx
but onkey *__*
i rly wanna know~ what they do behind the closed door XDDD
waiting for next :)

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t3z4_b3rry2 September 25 2010, 20:54:41 UTC
well~ i don't even know how am i supposed to explain it.
Jonghyun, may be he worry that if Key and Onew continue doing their things, somehow someone will find out and cause alot of trouble for all of them.
Or may be he was just jealous of them. :3

you loled abit?! i'm really flattered.
coz i actually dunno how to put humour in my writing. >,<

ah~ please don't expect too much.
but i'll try my best. :3

thank you for reading and commenting. <3

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fallegstelpa September 25 2010, 23:45:14 UTC
onew was a horny bunny and key was a beyond tempter. onkey lovey dovey act really can't handle.

honestly, i'm still confused with jjong's pissed off. he was worry or by any chance, he was just jealouse ... nooo, i think he........or maybe.........aarrgggggghhhhh.....makes me wonder...............

please, continued it

i'll be waiting for.

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t3z4_b3rry2 September 26 2010, 02:03:47 UTC
aaahhh~ it's really nice to see you again. <3

Well, Jjong was pissed off actually really is unexplainable.
But, i think may be i will try to give a little clue in the next chapter?! but, i dunno. I'm not sure, this story was just flowing in my head. Me myself can't figure out what to come.

Yeah, defenitely.

Thank you for reading and commmenting. <3

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jinkikibum September 26 2010, 01:00:10 UTC
Jonghyun was scared that he might lose his best friends because of this. But both Key and Onew didn’t understand it. They just didn’t understand.
M I thinking too much or does this sentence means like Jonghyun is afraid like the fans or SM may know about their relationship and is force to leave kind of thing?haha,maybe I'm just think too much.Love the story so far,update soon:)

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t3z4_b3rry2 September 26 2010, 02:07:29 UTC
whaaa~ i actually i dunno either.
Jonghyun's thought was really complicated. (well, it was my thought actually). xD

Ah~ thank you for liking the story. I'm flattered. <3

I'll try to update it soon.
Thank you for reading and commenting. <3

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t3z4_b3rry2 September 26 2010, 02:09:05 UTC
Heehee~ i love to torture Jonghyun. That's all. xD

Ah~ sure.
I'll try to update it soon.

Thank you for reading and commenting. <3

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