{FIC} Behind the Closed Door (2/?)

[t3z4_b3rry2]

Minho and Taemin were playing the playstation when Jonghyun was barging inside their dorm and slamming the door behind him. His action made Taemin winched in freight. They both paused the game and stared at the growing shadow that fell to the living room.

“..hyung? what happened?” Minho asked when he saw Jonghyun entering the living room heading

Comments

[rinni1905]

Oh my gosh, even though Jjong was in bad mood and threw tantrum everywhere, I still find him cute, because it's hard to live in the same roof with a lovey-dovey couple, not to mention that they're hungry for each other all the time. If I were Jjong, I would bang OnKey's bedroom door and tell them to shut up. But it might stimulate them further, make them more horny with each other, since they would know that somebody heard them. Public sex is a big turn on to everyone. Don't you think so?

Oh, my Jongderrella, welcome to the world of misery. Poor Jjong, I wonder what will happen in the next chap. Didn't Joon mention about some girls? I have a bad feeling about this. And OnKey's hinted sex is just so hot. You know, smut is both easy and hard to write, just take your time, and when you feel ready, you can write it. Don't worry about the smut part much, I still love your fic even when it's smut-free. Keke.

Thanks a lot for writing chap 2 so soon, I can't wait for your next update.

[t3z4_b3rry2]

Ahhh~ i love to read your comment.

Public sex is a big turn on to everyone. Don't you think so?

i DO think so. lol
ah~ your comment gave me idea bout public sex. i'll try to find out how to write bout it. but of course not for this fic. xD

actually i want to skip bout the girls part, but since you already mentioned it, may be i'll write a bit of it. actually it isn't really important part. xD

teehee~
i'm glad you like it eventhough it's still smut-free. xD
i'll try to write it better for the next chapter.
i hope you wouldn't mind to wait a little bit more this time.

thank you for reading. <3

[7nyy]

hahaha horny bunniessorry, it's just thought some things XDD
Jhyun , poor, XDDD
Joon, hep him.

:DDD

more, please~~

[t3z4_b3rry2]

lol
don't worry. Joon had already came to saved Jonghyun. xD

trying my best now~
thank you for reading. <3

[akari_hayashi]

Lol Jjong is upset because he is sexually deprived himself. Poor thing.

[t3z4_b3rry2]

yeah~ i think he just need someoone to help him. xD

thank you for reading. <3

[juphen]

onkey should start making a dorm wall soundproof
poor jonghyun!

[t3z4_b3rry2]

ahaha~ yeah!
they should've made the room sound-proof first before doing it. xD

thank you for reading. <3

[ttwyaopbtoyatw]

i sense a bit of joonhyun chemistry goin on!!!!