for language...

May 28, 2005 09:29

i wrote 2 poems for my topic in language. Read 'em ( Read more... )

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poems anonymous May 29 2005, 02:38:46 UTC
Hayley Lynn, those r amazing poems!!! You have a natural talent.Your going to get an A on those for sure. Your best one to me is the first one. Good Job!!!!!!

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Re: poems t_h_y_m_e June 1 2005, 22:45:14 UTC
hah hayley lynn... i definitely know who wrote that one... lol...

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candi_licious May 29 2005, 03:45:15 UTC
Hayli Lynn! U ARE AMAZING HUN! the best, ur always there.those were very emotional poems that u wrote. very good tho!!! well luv ya always!!!

FRIENDS FOREVER, Junie

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ninety_1 May 29 2005, 16:16:45 UTC
great writes, hayli. :)
they are a blend of sadness, emotion, and venting, but in a perfect way.

<333,
allie

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five_nightmares May 30 2005, 02:56:20 UTC
if you dont cut, you wouldn't know how it feels.
i do, and reading those poems made me see that people
do so many things for trends.
it's an escape, not a plee to god.

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dude... t_h_y_m_e June 1 2005, 22:47:50 UTC
it's just for my fricking language project, and i do know how it feels, cuz i did.

and to some people it is a plee to god. i mean it depends on the way you look at it.

ok smart ass?

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Re: dude... t_h_y_m_e June 1 2005, 23:00:25 UTC
uh... sorry... i didn't mean that really... i just didn't know who u were... oh... ily too... hah...

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NGRFACE. five_nightmares June 2 2005, 23:40:24 UTC
i just have a question?
at school if i don't even have a smile on my face for two seconds you say "oh, what's wrong" and of course I say "nothing". To me it looks like you are just another kid in the crowd who wants to fit in. You expect me to happy ALL the time so why is so odd to suspect that you aren't happy?

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Awsome happy_endings82 June 1 2005, 01:19:38 UTC
Those are so great. They really capture emotion. Rock out.
(don't mind the siggy. I never leave homw without it! lol)

~Ren
"Lets play the lying game."
"Okay. I'm a world champion clog dancer"
"I'm the world's tallest midget."
"I know I'm not going to miss you with all my heart and soul"
"I know you really are coming back *starts to cry* and that this isn't really the last night we'll spend together..."
~Parker and Travis from RFR

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