Hayley Lynn, those r amazing poems!!! You have a natural talent.Your going to get an A on those for sure. Your best one to me is the first one. Good Job!!!!!!
if you dont cut, you wouldn't know how it feels. i do, and reading those poems made me see that people do so many things for trends. it's an escape, not a plee to god.
i just have a question? at school if i don't even have a smile on my face for two seconds you say "oh, what's wrong" and of course I say "nothing". To me it looks like you are just another kid in the crowd who wants to fit in. You expect me to happy ALL the time so why is so odd to suspect that you aren't happy?
Those are so great. They really capture emotion. Rock out. (don't mind the siggy. I never leave homw without it! lol)
~Ren "Lets play the lying game." "Okay. I'm a world champion clog dancer" "I'm the world's tallest midget." "I know I'm not going to miss you with all my heart and soul" "I know you really are coming back *starts to cry* and that this isn't really the last night we'll spend together..." ~Parker and Travis from RFR
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FRIENDS FOREVER, Junie
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they are a blend of sadness, emotion, and venting, but in a perfect way.
<333,
allie
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i do, and reading those poems made me see that people
do so many things for trends.
it's an escape, not a plee to god.
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and to some people it is a plee to god. i mean it depends on the way you look at it.
ok smart ass?
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at school if i don't even have a smile on my face for two seconds you say "oh, what's wrong" and of course I say "nothing". To me it looks like you are just another kid in the crowd who wants to fit in. You expect me to happy ALL the time so why is so odd to suspect that you aren't happy?
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(don't mind the siggy. I never leave homw without it! lol)
~Ren
"Lets play the lying game."
"Okay. I'm a world champion clog dancer"
"I'm the world's tallest midget."
"I know I'm not going to miss you with all my heart and soul"
"I know you really are coming back *starts to cry* and that this isn't really the last night we'll spend together..."
~Parker and Travis from RFR
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