At last, at last - 'Song of the Treadmill' - part thirteen!

Jan 26, 2008 22:55

*waves* Helloooooooooo out there! So sorry for the long delay. I have been sick, recovering, and then *sick again*, omg. I swear, it's been the lamest, longest season for being sick *ever ( Read more... )

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roxymissrose January 27 2008, 06:05:10 UTC
It's a wonderful thing that we share this love, a wonderful thing.

I can see them vividly, the wild crazy ride here was breath-taking. I liked the flashes of humor, because that's how they are.

I didn't...think. Dean - I wasn't pretending -"

"I know you weren't," Dean said. His voice was hoarse and he pushed himself up a little, disengaging. Sam let him go so far and then no further, forcing Dean to prop himself on one elbow, ribcage still pushing into ribcage and their legs still tangled, jeans and boots and belts sewing them together.

"I bit my girlfriend, too. I have a kink," Sam said, solemn, and Dean's expression lightened, quicksilver grin flicking across his mouth.

God, I love that! It's them in a nutshell, isn't it? Neither one of them really wants to hurt the other, and here it feels like Sam is being the protective one. Er, you know what I mean--I hope! ;)

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tabaqui January 27 2008, 06:52:24 UTC
It's quite delightful, isn't it?
There has to be humor. It makes the angst a little more bitter, the schmoop a little more sweet.

Yes! They really can't stand to hurt each other at all. They just can't.
*twirls you*
Thank you, bay-bee.

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lunabee34 January 27 2008, 06:08:49 UTC
Yayayyayayyayayaay

I love this and I love that way that even though they both have each other now they still have each lost each other and can never have that lost brother back. It's so poignant.

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tabaqui January 27 2008, 06:52:57 UTC
Yeah - it kind of hurts, even though they're not alone.
:)

Thank you thank you.

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gretazreta January 27 2008, 06:22:06 UTC
I love so much that they're both so desperate for each other that neither can get a full sentence out. This was really lovely, hot, but more than hot, because they love and need each other, both for themselves, and for what they represent about what they've lost. Guh. I just want them to be happy and together and make each other whole again...

great update! WHOOO!

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tabaqui January 27 2008, 06:54:07 UTC
I love that kind of desperate, too! Yay!
:)
Thank you thank you!

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mishaphappens January 27 2008, 06:44:59 UTC
I like how Sam is forgetting about his Dean but sad about it too. The point is, though, that Sam will love Dean forever and always, right?

I forget or maybe it wasn't mentioned, but was Sam together with Dean in his universe? Or not?

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tabaqui January 27 2008, 06:55:00 UTC
Oh, yes. In my mind, nobody but them for each other.
Thank you so much!

*and yes, they were together*

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graphix_fret January 27 2008, 07:41:12 UTC
tabaqui January 27 2008, 15:53:29 UTC
Thank you thank you, so much!

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