Oh man, that last line. Somehow it really struck home the essential point- Sam's humanity, in spite of the divine power. Because what is more human than curiosity?
Thank you so much! I loved making them all brotherly-bonding back and forth, it was fun. :) And what big brother would leave his little brother alone when he was all hung over and icky? Heee.
Oh, wonderful job with this chapter! I loved it. Especially this line:
Sam could feel Dean's heart beating under his palm. Could feel the beats throb upward through his arm - pound through his body. Solid - certain - steady. Bloodsmokesteel but also love, and courage. "I do. I trust him."
This really does seem to be the essence of Dean. You've created a slightly different Dean than in the series ... leaner and tougher, but just as loyal and strong. Love your Sam as well, and the mythology you've set up here.
Thank you so much! And you have no idea how awesome it is to hear you say that this Dean is 'different'. I so wanted him to be, without losing that essential 'Dean-ness'. Thank you so much!
there is so much i want to say about this chapter but i cant find the words right now. so ill settle for saying this: it was beautiful. you had me worried but for no reason it would seem. this touched something in me that might be somewhere in the range of a thousandth of what it would feel like to be touched by Raziel. terribly profound would be one way i can describe this but there are so many more! just know this: you have a wonderful piece going here and i hope to see more soon. im really getting into the mythology of this uni ~_^ keep em comin yo!
lol but one more thing before i forget to ask! could i perhaps con you into doing a sticky post for the whole thing so i can mem it? cause that would be stellar!
O.O you dont--? its kinda like a big lj cut or index where you post links to all your fics or all the chapters in one fic and so on. its more than a tag cause it kind of condenses the info into a single smaller post where you can see it all at once. if any of that made sense -_-;
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Sometimes, you only have to ask.
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(2 small things:
"Get away from him. You can't have him."
"put Hebrew translation here". The angel's hand moved too fast for them to see I think that's supposed to be different text.
Also, your last paragraph has "angle" instead of "angel.")
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I was all 'change that, change that' 'cause i hadn't got the translation yet and then i *didn't*. Sheesh. Thank you.
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And thank you!
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I loved making them all brotherly-bonding back and forth, it was fun.
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And what big brother would leave his little brother alone when he was all hung over and icky? Heee.
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Sam could feel Dean's heart beating under his palm. Could feel the beats throb upward through his arm - pound through his body. Solid - certain - steady. Bloodsmokesteel but also love, and courage. "I do. I trust him."
This really does seem to be the essence of Dean. You've created a slightly different Dean than in the series ... leaner and tougher, but just as loyal and strong. Love your Sam as well, and the mythology you've set up here.
I'm so looking forward to more!
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And you have no idea how awesome it is to hear you say that this Dean is 'different'. I so wanted him to be, without losing that essential 'Dean-ness'. Thank you so much!
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I have no idea what a 'sticky post' is.
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