'The Song of the Treadmill' - final chapter!! 17/17

May 01, 2008 23:09

Oh, i thought this would *never* come. Sheesh! I can't believe i took so long, writing this final chapter. But! Here it is. I hope it's up to snuff! And that it ends in a satisfying way for everyone who's stuck with me so far.

Thank you, as always, darkhavens for her excellent polish. And sweptawaybayou for keeping me going.

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iyalode May 2 2008, 07:19:02 UTC
Best chapter ever. I'm all kinds of fangirl impressed you have Sam not being able to destroy the grigori. It fits so perfectly into this verse and canon.

I'm having a bet with myself how long it takes for Dean to quote Connor MacLeod. Hee.

Absolutely wonderful ending.

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tabaqui May 2 2008, 11:18:45 UTC
BWAAAAAAAhahahha! Now why in hell didn't i think of Highlander? My brain was frazzled, i guess.
'There can be only one!'
*snickers*

Thank you so much!

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bendtothesun May 2 2008, 08:04:03 UTC
A gorgeous chapter, a gorgeous end (or beginning rather because there's more for these boys to do, to continue on and lord your worlds are so good). Ties it all up and yet- and yet.. Man you just rock y'know?

Unmaking it, molecule by molecule.

Scared the crap out of me that line. Because destroy it, kill it it's not the same as unmaking it and for Sam to *have* that power. Scary scary scary.

But Sam not being able to kill it Grigori because of who they are and Dean being able to because he's not. It's perfect. It's the loophole against their power and it's the prince sending his knight out to battle for him.

I love it. love it love it love it. *gleeeeee*

Thank you so much for this story. For sharing it, hell for writing it. It's made me so happy so many times that it's- I-

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tabaqui May 2 2008, 11:20:28 UTC
*twirls you*
Thank you so very much! I just could *not* give Sam that much power - it would be too much. And in my mind, demons and angels are exactly the same thing, only one's given up all hope of light, and therefore makes the difference.

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meret May 2 2008, 08:15:42 UTC
Yay! This is terrific. :)

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tabaqui May 2 2008, 11:20:39 UTC
Thank you!
:)

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deanshot May 2 2008, 12:21:12 UTC
Just fantastic.
I really liked the banter between them at the end.
It made me smile, that they're still together.
I laughed the same time as Sam when Dean said that last sentence.
I just realised it said final chapter so I had to come back in and edit my comment, LOL.
Thanks so much for a terrific story.
*hugs*

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tabaqui May 2 2008, 13:02:33 UTC
Thank you so very much!
:)

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innie_darling May 2 2008, 13:30:03 UTC
The thought of living up to Dean - of doing what Dean had since he was just a kid - was fucking terrifying. Absolutely.

Dean nesting!

I'm looking forward to getting to read this through in one straight rush. Anyway, congratulations to you! What a beautiful thing you've made!

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tabaqui May 2 2008, 13:34:00 UTC
Yes! With curtains! Hee.
Thank you thank you, so much!
:)

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