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Blood of Alien, Chapter Two

Nov 28, 2006 22:03

TITLE: Blood of Alien

RATING: PG-13 for now.

DISCLAIMER: None of the characters are mine, nor are any of the plots that the fic is based on. They belong to the WB or Jason Katims or whatever.

PAIRINGS: Undecided

SUMMARY: Larek delivers a message to the group, a couple breaks up (for now, at least), and Isabel has two wacky dreams ( Read more... )

chapterfic, fic, roswell, blood of alien

Comments 5

anotebooklove November 29 2006, 21:24:34 UTC

yay!

Feedback: Blood of Alien prozacpark January 9 2007, 21:33:10 UTC

So, I've been meaning to read this since you posted the prologue, but I was in the middle of finals and then it slipped my mind. But better late than never, yes ( ... )

Re: Feedback: Blood of Alien tabasco_cookies January 11 2007, 17:55:46 UTC

Spamming? Please. This is awesome feedback.

I'm really liking the tension between Max and Isabel and how you're working towards possibly resolving it (and why the hell can the fic not be Outsidery?
Don't worry; I'm not above bringing up the subject again. But Isabel already has enough potential final love interests for me to worry about considering Max as the one. Vilandra is a ho, don't you know?

And the Tess/Kyle post-prom scene was awesome, and I loved their bonding and it even made me ship a bit.
You think? I tried to make that scene as brother-sisterly as I could in order to downplay the possibility. I liked the Tess/Kyle dynamic on the show, but I wouldn't want it to turn into anything else.

I liked that Liz is totally irrational in her jealousy and Maria in her empathy towards Liz. I realized lately (lately? I don't know; sometime in between when I stopped watching and now) that I actually dislike Maria's character more than Liz's. I didn't notice while the show was on, because Liz was annoying to watch while Maria ( ... )

Re: Feedback: Blood of Alien prozacpark January 11 2007, 21:54:59 UTC

Vilandra is kind of whorey, no? Heh. DBJ got it right when he said that Isabel had a Virgin/Whore complex. She has all these potential love interests, but never goes for any. Or, you know, she could just be gay ( ... )

Re: Feedback: Blood of Alien tabasco_cookies January 16 2007, 16:07:50 UTC

I came across some of my own Roswell fic from the early days of the show?

Hahahaha what is this:

http://tv.groups.yahoo.com/group/All-Roswell/message/12523

Look at that plagiarism! :D