Original fiction!

[tabbyclaw]

It's long for a teaser snippet (over 5200 words? Jeez, I can ramble!), it's very much half-baked at this point, and it's infodump-y, mostly for my own information. But it's interesting me, even if I don't know where it's going, and I want to see what y'all think of it. Give me feedback, ask me questions, poke at me with sticks, whatever it inspires

Comments

Spookshow Baby here

[anonymous]

Wow. I like this. I like the feel of it.
Little loose in places, and as you said, a little info dumpy, but I'd get my teeth into this really really easily.