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A Reason to live

Aug 17, 2011 22:26

Title: A Reason to live (One-shot)

Pairing: Haehyuk

Rating: PG-13

Genre: fluff, drama(?)

Warning: minor drug use

Summary: Donghae owes his dealer some money. Because of that his boyfriend is kidnapped. Donghae has to save his boyfriend before something bad happens.

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pg-13, fic: a reason to live, haehyuk

Comments 6

mjaku August 18 2011, 16:10:06 UTC

Haha, isn't it a lot more fun to write in english??? :"DDD But it was good!! I liked it but I'll say the same thing to you as i said to Pipsa when she wrote her first fic: MORE DESCRIPTIONS!!!!! xD

...And I liked the Siwon the drugdealer-concept XD Twisted me XD

tae3tae3 August 19 2011, 19:57:00 UTC

I love to write in English! And all I really did was just translate it from the original story.. I already added some shit between the lines... I'm not that good story-writer so i didn't have any ideas what I should add there.. And even though Pipsa is trying to get me write more fics, I don't think so...
Thanks! I changed the characters from the original story and when I was figuring out who should be the drugdealer, Siwon just kind of crossed my mind...
Ois varmaa ollu Helenalla kiva lukee jtn yaoi tarinaa jossa nimetki on korealaisii xD

heliumoxygen August 29 2011, 16:20:49 UTC

Wow! Great fic & use of language since eng isn't your first language! (I saw the previous comment). Well written & love the plot! Slightly rushed but cute! <3

tae3tae3 August 29 2011, 19:17:17 UTC

Thanks! It's nice to get some constructive criticism :)) I'll try to remember that when/if I write more fics.. :D

yuue04 August 30 2011, 09:26:07 UTC

i spot this out of nowhere
but i like this
the conflict isn't too tense
i think you did a good job
good luck for your next entries ^^/

tae3tae3 August 30 2011, 14:31:13 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting! :))
*starts thinking on a plot for next entry*