It may not have a plot. But I swear this is so sweet! I almost melted at "Jessica places her hand on the back of Tiffany’s neck and pulls her forward and thinks I love you in her mind before whispering it against Tiffany’s lips."
SoshiPops deserves more JeTi fluff! JeTi angst is making me very depressed. Good job. I love how carefree Tiffany makes Jessica feel.
pfft who needs a plot when its so fluffy XD happy JeTi is just the absolute best >.< i dont care how much the LJ community seems to like angst lol fluff wins imo! i love the idea of Tiffany and Jessica just driving away from everything and going to some beach on the outskirts :D the use of their korean names seems to be getting really popular when trying to show the differences between their entertainment personas and their real self i love that Tiffany is the only person who can make Jessica like this :) love it! i hope you write more JeTi~!! keep up the awesome work :D
I actually see a plot in this despite what your other readers are saying. The plot basically is that finding free time in their hectic schedule, Tiffany plans a trip to go with Jessica to the beach and uses the ice cream coupons sort of as a way to get Jessica to go with her. The story then culminates with their confession and kiss.
It's actually well written for it being your first fanfic and this is something a lot of people can't do. Which is why I happen to be so picky when reading xD But I did enjoy this a lot. It was cute and fluffy and Jessica describes Tiffany too perfectly I might add.
Whew, I was afraid of getting the characters out of character, since the SNSD fandom is still a little new to me. Thank you ;_; and I'm aiming to improve~
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"Jessica places her hand on the back of Tiffany’s neck and pulls her forward and thinks I love you in her mind before whispering it against Tiffany’s lips."
SoshiPops deserves more JeTi fluff! JeTi angst is making me very depressed. Good job. I love how carefree Tiffany makes Jessica feel.
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After rampaging through soshipops I've fallen for the jeti, angst or not xD We need to write more...
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happy JeTi is just the absolute best >.< i dont care how much the LJ community seems to like angst lol fluff wins imo!
i love the idea of Tiffany and Jessica just driving away from everything and going to some beach on the outskirts :D
the use of their korean names seems to be getting really popular when trying to show the differences between their entertainment personas and their real self
i love that Tiffany is the only person who can make Jessica like this :)
love it! i hope you write more JeTi~!!
keep up the awesome work :D
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I dunno, I think stage names and their own names were an interesting comparison. :P jeti ftw, soshipops needs to have more fic~
Thank you very much!
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Ahhh, thank you for your comment!
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It's actually well written for it being your first fanfic and this is something a lot of people can't do. Which is why I happen to be so picky when reading xD But I did enjoy this a lot. It was cute and fluffy and Jessica describes Tiffany too perfectly I might add.
Keep the stories coming~
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Whew, I was afraid of getting the characters out of character, since the SNSD fandom is still a little new to me. Thank you ;_; and I'm aiming to improve~
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