Grass Fire - Chapter 3

[taemun]

Title: Grass Fire
Pairing: YunJae
Length: 3/?
Genre: Historical AU, Adventure, Romance, Drama, Angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Prostitution, Rape, Slavery
Disclaimer: Based on the graphic novel Habibi by Craig Thompson

Summary: Since the night he caught Yunho mid-air, Jaejoong has never once lost his fighting spirit. With nothing but an old family

Comments

[yoochunforehead]

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[yoochunforehead]

omg so much happening in this chapter and i loved every sentence of it... dear god now i want MORE MORE MORE MORE ^^^ i'm already in deep! this is the first fic i've read in ages that is actually making me use my imagination

"my yun" and "desert rat" ^^^ i was giggling at Jaejoong pretending to be an anteater and yunho not knowing what one was... and jaejoong & yunho's names <333 i swooned a little bit. also unf at jaejoong's makeup... i can smell some sexual tension on the horizon? can't wait for next update.

happy birthday btw, i hope you have a lovely day <3 <3 <3

[taemun]

Wow that is quite the compliment... If it's making you use your imagination... The I must be doing something right :D

Hehehehe yay! And upcoming sexual tension... It's YunJae after all, it's impossible not to have that. ;D But not only happy things coming ;-;

Thank youuuuuuuu I'm old now tho D: xD

[borborygmus5000]

Oh the writing here is all sorts of lovely. (: I finally found some time to sit in front of my laptop to read it properly (because this seems like the sort of fic I can't read off my phone with a squint eye), and I love it already! I'm really curious about how Jaejoong is foraging at the nomad camps; at some point in time throughout the years his methods would have changed, no? In any case, you always have interesting plots so I'm in for the ride now.

Thanks for sharing, I'm looking forward to your future updates (:

[taemun]

I'm so glad you like my writing^^ And indeed, his methods would have changed... he lost the "pity the hungry child" card at some point while growing up after all.

Thank you for reading~ I really hope you will enjoy the plot to the end^^

[lola_xoxo92]

I love your style of writing. It's so descriptive and "flowy". Haha! I looked over some Habibi images, and it's totally coherent with what you're writing. Jaejoong here is so motherly and responsible with Yunho that I just can't  >3<  I sense some future sexual tension. I can't wait. This is all sorts of lovely. It's perfect. Thanks for the fast update and HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!! Wish you all the best! ^^

[taemun]

That means a lot to me, I'm always so insecure about my writing style being too wordy and descriptive... So I'm really glad you like it ;-; And especially these first chapters are very in tune to the original work, so I'm happy you think it's coherent^^ Sexual tension, hmm, coming up! But not only happy things ;-;

Thank you for reading~ And the birthday wishes! :3

[lola_xoxo92]

Oh, and I forgot to mention Jae's guyliner! GAWD!!! More, more, MOOOOORE!!!!! :D

[n3uromanc3r]

Ooooh Happy Birthday

[taemun]

Thank you~~

Yeah, Jaejoong is very mature... It's pretty incredible what kind of stuff kids can survive when they have to. And the caravans pass by pretty far away, so they have had good luck until now indeed...

I think your curiosity about those trips will be answered in the next chapter, for better or for worse :) And maybe even Yunho's hair... And you are so right about knowing how to read and write being a big asset!

Haha, Yunho indeed is shamless... But he was only 10, of course he'd be curious... and shameless. Haha xD

Thank you for reading!! And your long comment too<3