Grass Fire - Chapter 10

May 18, 2013 04:03

Title: Grass Fire
Pairing: YunJae
Length: 10/?
Genre: Historical AU, Adventure, Romance, Drama, Angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Prostitution, Rape, Slavery
Disclaimer: Based on the graphic novel Habibi by Craig Thompson

Summary: Since the night he caught Yunho mid-air, Jaejoong has never once lost his fighting spirit. With nothing but an old family ( Read more... )

☂ title: grass fire, ❄ band: dbsk, ♫ fanfic, ♡ yunjae

Leave a comment

Comments 87

tickled41 May 18 2013, 02:29:01 UTC
"dark underside of his eyes"
please tell me jae is talking about eye bags and not abuse. why T_T

Reply

taemun May 18 2013, 17:57:25 UTC
Awww don't cry ;-; I totally meant eye bags! The chief is a violent man, but he's more into whipping guys' asses in battle, than into abusing his consorts... Jae is safe in that regard!

Thank you for reading!^^

Reply


jaemono May 18 2013, 04:12:18 UTC
Taemunnie.... Are you alright? Posting this early.... :O

I'll come back later, need to go to my part-time job.

Reply

jaemono May 18 2013, 13:58:31 UTC
Okay, sooooooo I'm back! :D

Jaejoongie needs human contact. It broke my heart that he was flustered and confused by the touch. He can't hit his baby rat in worry after all.... x__x

Why do they put him in that room with all the others? Jaejoongie rat ;____; I wish you were back at the desert ship with your little family member.... ;____;

Will something happen between Jaejoong and Sarantuya?? D: Nergüi said to be careful, omomo Jaejoong even though you're full of passion, I hope your blunt personality will not shove you into nothing but trouble!

I thought the Chief would be different, but he still took Jaejoong that way. Why? My poor mother rat...

I really want to see Jaejoongie's long hair... Just like in Dr. Jin and a short part in Jackal is Coming. So freaking sexy *____* I'm writing a fiction at the moment and he has long hair too, the mental image makes me so doki-doki~

DO NOT WANT A LITTLE FLAME. Bad Chief.... I want mother rat and baby rat ;O;

“We shall forget all about it…together,” the chief added just before he ( ... )

Reply

taemun May 18 2013, 18:44:26 UTC
Aigoo, the reason why I posted so early, I had actually just come home^^; I was kinda, cough, drunk. But thank you for your concern!^^ I do have some time to post (since these are all prewritten chapters), it's just the stress that prevents me from doing so! But since I was drunk... xD Well, it makes everything easier xD

You're right, Jaejoong really does need human contact... It wasn't exactly good for him OR Yunho to just live alone there at the steppe... Jae used to live with a huge extended family in his childhood after all (like everyone does in the North where he's from), and Yunho hasn't exactly grown up stable and good either...

But still, living there would be better than what's happening now, wouldn't it >____<

Hmm, we'll see more of Sarantuya later ;D

Oh yes, Jaejoong with long hair *-* Oh god the photos from Jackal... I die everytime, again and again when I see them... You're writing the historical Joseon fic right? Historical=long hair=love<3<3<3 ( ... )

Reply

jaemono May 19 2013, 07:55:58 UTC
You were? LOL XD HAHA, I thought something was wrong and there you went, partying hard? x"D

Aahhh.... this was prewritten, I see I see... :3

Yes, I liked their little desert pirate place ;~~;

I look forward to it! *__*

Ahh you know about it?? :O Not many people know I write one or they just skip my entry on jaehodetox or even a person ignored my question if she'd like to read it. I'll get the message by that... =.= You don't want to. But I'll continue my best even though I'm not popular, popular means quality after all!

Around his 40s but sporty... Okay... :3

I'm in my second week now, finals are three weeks. If I don't graduate I'm going to bawl. ;___________;

Yay, can't wait for it! :D

Reply


fangirling118 May 18 2013, 04:24:21 UTC
Just woke up an saw the update \o/

Reply

fangirling118 May 19 2013, 09:15:32 UTC
So excited you updated !!!~w ( ... )

Reply

taemun May 19 2013, 09:34:43 UTC
Jae is making the best of his surroundings... That's what he's used to doing. He's never had it easy after all :)

Ooh, questions, I like questions 8)

1. This is the question indeed! I can only say that it's also the reason why they have to be separated... Jaejoong would never see Yunho as a man if they grew up together until the end. He would never see Yunho as anything else but his own baby.

But right now, he's trying to forget his baby Yunho with all his might...

2. Min and Su... Oh yes, we will see them >:D Yes, we will... But it will take a while! So don't be too eager xD

3. I have only planned in detail until chapter 15-16, but the whole story will be around 20 I think :) We are now about halfway...

4. Oh, you will know it in the next Jaejoong chapter already :)

5. He's tried hard to give Yun up, but his heart will never forget no matter how much he tries...

Oh, that photo fits so well!! Yunho looks so young in it too... Just like in my story ;-;

Reply


sheilapiglet May 18 2013, 04:41:46 UTC
what do you mean by "dark underside of his eyes"?....does that imply lack of sleep and therefore eye bags?...tho having make up and looking good shud be the least of Jae's worries...I don't think the chief would hit him....he doesn't seem like the type for abusive sex.

anyways, it's sad that Jae continues to be used for pleasure...I was hoping the chief would be different some how...guess I got my hopes up too high.

the Jaeho reunion is taking too long=(

Reply

sheilapiglet May 18 2013, 05:47:35 UTC
ps: I wonder what the other reason is for Jae to be brought there?...seems as tho the chief is hiding something.

Reply

taemun May 18 2013, 17:59:43 UTC
Yes, I meant eye bags from lack of sleep... I hadn't even realised people might read it as a bruise! So don't worry, Jae's not being hit. You're right, the chief isn't that kind of a man.

The chief has his own reasons....Good observation ;) We'll see more about that!

I'm sorry it's taking so long ;-; Will still take some time too...

Thank you for reading~

Reply


shin_ah_mi May 18 2013, 04:56:41 UTC
you updated...
thank you
hope you're doing fine...fighting dear!!!

Reply

taemun May 18 2013, 17:55:36 UTC
Thank you for reading! And your kind words too!! :3 Fighting :3

Reply


Leave a comment

Up