AsaKiku Fanfiction: Aces Chapter One

[tagbilaran_ape]

So it shocked him when Wang Yao just came out from his house (or apartment, like someone wanted to call it) contented- grumpy, yes, but satisfied indeed. Of course he knew that no crime was committed in their household, since his significant other was a very loyal man and would never dare to cheat on him. This he had no doubts about, yet it was

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[pencildarts]

Aww, it's okay~ It was really fluffy, too! You might want to put those info-thingies at the top. You know, the title, author, rating, warnings, so and so.

I have problems with paragraphs with more than five lines, though. I don't know why :|.

[tagbilaran_ape]

Okay, shall be edited.

Man, going on and off the internet can be tiring. Especially when I have chores.

Problem writing or problem reading?

[pencildarts]

Hmm, a bit of both, really. I guess it's more of the reading though, but I honestly have no idea why I get lazy looking at paragraphs with more that five lines D8.

Oops, sorry. You don't have to respond instantly if you're doing chores :).