Bombing of Britain [2/?] - Escape

[taggedy]

Sorry it took so long D:, I've started university and all the organisation and moving and getting internet where all factors. Its actually been sat on my pc for ages.
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Alfred had made a promise to visit Matthew more often after leaving that night, its one of the thoughts that had stayed vivid in his otherwise lucid mind. It had been, to say

Comments

[medev]

I just found this fic and I'm really liking it!!! really interesting. can't wait for the next chap. loved how you portrayed England and the little I saw of Germany. but one question is this fic going to be focusing in a pair? because I have found some hints of FrUK and USUK, although it looks more family than anything, but still, just curious. becouse I really love USUK but don't know if you are going to focus it that way, sure hope so though.

anyway, great fic :)

[rensirita]

Great fic! I like the angsty atmosphere that you've created with the World War background. :)

[allyoucaneater]

;__; I would say that I like this fic, but I think you really REALLY need a beta reader. It's somewhat painful for me to read this because of the occasional mis-use of your and you're and then there's the lack of capital letters and commas when there need to be one (it has a really good atmosphere and likeable plot though, so don't be saddened by my comment. Mind it, I'm not a good writer myself)

[ren_chan146]

Oh I had so hoped that you would continue this story sometime. I loved the first chapter and I really like the second as well.
Hope there will be more in the future.^^