poem: bored at work send help

[tahariel]

slowly
           sinking
into
                       stultifying
    boredom.
Check my phone; nothing
new.
A text gets no reply.
Fingers tap on keyboard,
too light for words;
too dull for interest.
I
          sink
and
                  do not try
             to
swim.

Comments

[leviathans_moon]

Can I just say, I love the sinking imagery you create when placing the words apart like at the beginning and end.

Generally really like this one. A text gets no reply so much implied I think.

[tahariel]

Thank you! I'm really pleased you like it :)