Poem: my scar is bigger than your scar

Jan 30, 2012 23:51


Let’s compare scars.

Like a childhood game -

My Mum cooks better than your Mum.

My Dad’s car is bigger than your car.

My scar is bigger than your scar,

it is

immeasurable, a well

of agony and wretched poison,

unhealed and unkissed;

where once the skin was smooth and taut

it now lies twisted and a mess

of rigid lines and bitter disappointments

quite unlike ( Read more... )

where did this come from (i blame erik), poetry, my poetry, writing

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afrocurl January 31 2012, 02:38:33 UTC
Oh the comparison game. Ouch.

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leviathans_moon January 31 2012, 17:15:13 UTC
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thank you.

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