Comments | taikoukuiu: A Fairy Tale

taikoukuiu

A Fairy Tale

Dec 20, 2005 00:03

So this is definitely a fairy tale I wrote in the fifth grade for some contest or something. Its a little long, I wont be offended if you dont read it. I found it today and it made me smile. I know, its rather cheesy and cutesy, but try to keep in mind i was 11 when i wrote it ( Read more... )

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boy howdy! what a doosie of a tale! anonymous December 20 2005, 07:13:33 UTC

this severly biased critic thinks that this should be published quickly, and pictures would be an AWESOME addition. I know a great artist(david reinking) he can hook u up with some stellar drawings of fairies, castles, cars, the works! so.........yeah, great story, and if i was that smart in 5th grade i'd probably be done with college and making 6..........no, dare i say 7 figures!! well, goodnight.....and send that to a publisher~!

lykos_socii December 20 2005, 13:54:56 UTC

Love the format change! Adds a nice feel, especially with the whole fairy-tale post.
A comment on the story itself? I don't know...it works. And it WAS written by an 11-year-old.

And it was still better than most high schoolers could write today. The state of the public education system...sigh.