Fill: Problems (Steve/Danny) [1/2]puckkitJuly 21 2011, 01:25:45 UTC
I hope multiple fills are allowed- I did this before I saw there was another fill.The problem is when Steve walks out of the dressing room in a suit off the rack (plain black, three buttons), makes his way over to the mirror and does a pivot that should look ridiculous but somehow doesn’t
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Re: Fill: Problems (Steve/Danny) [2/2]puckkitJuly 21 2011, 01:26:16 UTC
Steve shrugged and continued running his hand down the front of Danny’s chest. “Just making sure it’s a good fit. It’s important that we look the part.”
His hand made its way around the bottom of the suit jacket, slipping inside to squeeze his hip briefly before circling around to the small of his back.
Steve’s head dipped and Danny had a moment to wonder where the hell the clerk had disappeared to, and to be thankful that he had, before Steve diverted his course and looked over Danny’s shoulder.
Steve’s other hand joined the first and they straightened the coat from behind, furtively slipping beneath suit jacket, vest, and shirt to rest, hot and heavy, on skin. Danny felt his breath catch before his temper caught up. He hissed, “Are you out of your fucking m-“
Steve hummed and pulled him closer, muffling his voice in his chest. “Just relax,” he murmured. “I’m just checking the fit.”
Danny had more than a few words to say to that, most ran along the lines of when suit fitting was added to the how to how your breath underwater
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Re: Fill: Problems (Steve/Danny) [2/2]leupagusJuly 21 2011, 02:02:42 UTC
Yes and yes and all ways yes. I love it. I love the way Danny's completely clueless about how hot he is, how he's just registering Steve's manhandling without realizing why Steve's doing it, it's just gorgeous.
Re: Fill: Problems (Steve/Danny) [2/2]puckkitJuly 21 2011, 03:43:28 UTC
I'm glad you picked up on that! And I'm reeeeally glad you liked it! I'm sorry you don't get any real porn though, I'm more a fade-to-black kinda girl ;)
Suit!kink is a glorious thing that I wish to behold in any and all character/fandom/imagining.
Re: Fill: Problems (Steve/Danny) [2/2]hawaii50fangirlJuly 21 2011, 04:57:32 UTC
Multiple fills should never be discouraged! It just means more fabulousness for our reading pleasure. And this was very fabulous. I like Steve getting handsy and Danny's repeated noes.
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Steve shrugged and continued running his hand down the front of Danny’s chest. “Just making sure it’s a good fit. It’s important that we look the part.”
His hand made its way around the bottom of the suit jacket, slipping inside to squeeze his hip briefly before circling around to the small of his back.
Steve’s head dipped and Danny had a moment to wonder where the hell the clerk had disappeared to, and to be thankful that he had, before Steve diverted his course and looked over Danny’s shoulder.
Steve’s other hand joined the first and they straightened the coat from behind, furtively slipping beneath suit jacket, vest, and shirt to rest, hot and heavy, on skin. Danny felt his breath catch before his temper caught up. He hissed, “Are you out of your fucking m-“
Steve hummed and pulled him closer, muffling his voice in his chest. “Just relax,” he murmured. “I’m just checking the fit.”
Danny had more than a few words to say to that, most ran along the lines of when suit fitting was added to the how to how your breath underwater ( ... )
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Suit!kink is a glorious thing that I wish to behold in any and all character/fandom/imagining.
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*dies* perfect.
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