My Short Story

[showbizcutie]

The drive home from school was always so peaceful for Dixie, an ordinary eighteen year old girl with the stereotypical teen attitude that once she walked through the door at home, all hell would break loose. Most of the time, however, she had the uncanny ability of being correct. This drive home was not like any other she had experienced. The

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[broadwaylullaby]

It's interesting, but when you continue writing, you need to make sure to come back to the part where Dixie is crying in the car and explain why, because otherwise it leaves the audience confused. I get where you're going with this and your specificity is good! Keep writing!