Story changes and additions

[taiyukai]

Just so i dont cause confusion these are changes i made in my story that i am writting these are peices taken from the story most are not relavent to the one above it but you can try, if the characters are not named then there names are next to it. tell me what you think

Comments

[stephie_marie]

coolness!!!
love always,
stephie marie

[taiyukai]

yeah sure lol