Not ironing

Aug 11, 2012 23:47

Title: Over Spring
Rating: PG
Words: 5,834
Summary: Kid Loki and Thor. Set after Journey into Mystery 641.

After, Loki hides himself away. But Thor will find his brother.

My sort-of thanks to gnine for forcing me to write this, and to cienna for her always-helpful betaing.

Loki has always been one for shadows, for not being found when he doesn't want to be )

fic:journey into mystery, fic

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littlehollyleaf August 13 2012, 19:09:08 UTC
Omg another! I love it x Unlike some, I feel like I never really got to know Leah enough to become properly invested in her and her relationship with Loki. But if Marvel would have us assume Loki spent enough time with her and cared enough for her to angst in the way he began at the end of the issue then that's a win for me :)

You convey his grief here wonderfully. Quiet, hidden and with the potential to turn bitter and cold if left unattended. Love your Thor with his struggle to express his love but his inadequacy when it comes to using language in a way Loki will appreciate. Also nice to see him taking on the responsibility involved in a big brother role, worrying about appropriate content on the internet, really REALLY thinking and caring about how to talk to Loki and the best ways for them to spent time together.

Oh man, it was all just wonderful. I feel all warm and happy now. I wish there was enough time between the plot/action in the comics to have emotional, domestic moments like this!

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takadainmate August 28 2012, 09:00:33 UTC
I am so attached to Leah it really hurt when she was gone. ;_; Glad you liked this! I am having fun writing all the Journey into Mystery. I really do like my teeny tiny fandoms. :)

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mayhap August 21 2012, 15:53:31 UTC
Awwww, I love Thor's POV on Loki, all tender and wry and occasionally very confused. This is exactly what I needed after the BRB crying forever end of #641. ♥

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takadainmate August 28 2012, 09:02:46 UTC
Yes. I might never stop crying over JiM, I really might not. Glad you liked this so much and thanks for commenting! ♥

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