Title: Silver Bullets
Author:
spillalltheinkPairing: Adam/Jesse
Rating: R. Language, mild sex.
Disclaimer: This is fake and I don't own anyone or anything.
Summary: "So," Jesse finally says, pausing to take another sip, "I heard you went crazy."
Dedication:
echoelf for editing the crap out of this, and
love_torock for reading it over as well. ♥!
Notes: I am so glad to be done
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You know, I have to say, for someone with no actual experience, you did well. I've been in situations quite similar to what you have here with Adam, and this really struck a chord with me: The feeling of being on those sedatives and whatnot.
The writing itself was easy to read. It wasn't terribly stylistic, and therefore didn't really stand out. It told a story, which is all that we really need in writing.
I liked the characterization, especially for Jesse, although Adam almost had too much personality.
This is the most in depth review I've left in months. So, I figure, for that, this fic definitely deserves to go in my memories.
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I have been wanting some good Adam and Jesse... and this was just what I wanted!
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I added it to my memories :)
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