Silver Bullets

Feb 11, 2008 14:58

Title: Silver Bullets
Author: spillalltheink
Pairing: Adam/Jesse
Rating: R. Language, mild sex.
Disclaimer: This is fake and I don't own anyone or anything.
Summary: "So," Jesse finally says, pausing to take another sip, "I heard you went crazy."
Dedication: echoelf for editing the crap out of this, and love_torock for reading it over as well. ♥!
Notes: I am so glad to be done ( Read more... )

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goodbyesheesha February 16 2008, 09:07:24 UTC
First off, this is the best seen I've seen in this fandom for a while. Thankyou for reviving my faith in Long Island.

You know, I have to say, for someone with no actual experience, you did well. I've been in situations quite similar to what you have here with Adam, and this really struck a chord with me: The feeling of being on those sedatives and whatnot.

The writing itself was easy to read. It wasn't terribly stylistic, and therefore didn't really stand out. It told a story, which is all that we really need in writing.

I liked the characterization, especially for Jesse, although Adam almost had too much personality.

This is the most in depth review I've left in months. So, I figure, for that, this fic definitely deserves to go in my memories.

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thediscodancer February 16 2008, 17:55:46 UTC
This was amazing! I love the way you wrote both Adam and Jesse. It just felt so real.

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liquorice February 17 2008, 04:13:28 UTC
I really liked this :)
I have been wanting some good Adam and Jesse... and this was just what I wanted!

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ex_argh February 17 2008, 04:35:51 UTC
:) I really really loved reading this. :) I think it was really well written and the way you wrote Adam and Jesse was brilliant! ♥

I added it to my memories :)

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dreadfulrauw February 17 2008, 07:47:50 UTC
i think i'm going to have to reread this for critical feedback, but i wanted to say that this might be the best story i've ever read with adam as protagonist. i bought your premise, and i loved it.

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