Curious

Mar 27, 2008 22:00

 
Title: Curious

Pairing: John Nolan/Adam Lazzara, Jesse Lacey/Adam Lazzara

Rating: R for sexual content and language

Summary: It is the story of John’s departure from TBS from Adam’s point of view. It is a sort of reverie brought on by Fred’s departure.

Disclaimer: This did not happen. It is only fiction. I do not own these people. Their parents do ( Read more... )

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careless123 March 28 2008, 19:27:36 UTC
I thought that was really good and well written. And I really like how you potrayed the relationship between adam/john/jesse. It was so good!!!

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go_onjustsay_it March 28 2008, 22:09:21 UTC
Thanks a lot. It isn't my best work, but I appreciate that you like it so much. I tend to be a bit hard on my writing though. The John/Jesse/Adam relationship has become a lost art recently. I was hoping to revive it a little with this. Anyway, thanks bunches!!

By the way, your Adam in horizontal stripes icon is beautiful.

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goodbyesheesha March 29 2008, 03:55:31 UTC
I left a rather incoherent rant on another fic early this morning, because there were three LI fics posted in a row. This was one of them. So thankyou, you made me very, very happy at 4AM when I was heavily sleep deprived and over-caffienated.
I mean, you've made me happy now, but I'm moderately coherent, so it's hardly entertaining.

I've noticed a little bit more of the Jesse/John/Adam triangle being posted lately, which I'm pretty happy about. It had kind of died out, and I like having the variety of newer pairings like Jesse/Kevin, as well as the originals.

My only critique is that I found it went a little bit too quickly.

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go_onjustsay_it March 29 2008, 05:14:04 UTC
I'm glad I made you happy. This is the type of fic I typically want to see, so I assume that everyone else does too. Actually, I usually want to see long, drawn out, many-chaptered fics, but I have not the discipline to finish one. (I have two started right now that I haven't touched in at least two years ( ... )

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goodbyesheesha March 30 2008, 03:26:23 UTC
I know how you feel about the chaptered fics. Unfortunately, my attention span is completely nonexistent and I usually only manage about 300 words on an idea before I move on. It's an issue.

I like to switch it up. Like I said, variety pleases me. Pairings, roles, whatever. I think anything can work, as long as it's executed well. Although, I have pairings I detest, such as Conor Oberst/Jesse Lacey. I don't see any logical connection between them.

And now you've inspired me to write manly!Adam, just to see if it could be pulled off.

And see, I can rant right back?

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go_onjustsay_it March 31 2008, 02:58:16 UTC
I don't think Conor Oberst makes sense with anyone. I try not to read any with him in them.

I'm glad you're flexible with pairings and such. I like things the way I like them, though. If you write a manly Adam and post it, I'm sorry to say I will not read it. It's nothing against you, I'm just so particular about that. It literally bugs the crap out of me to read things I don't like to see. I'm sure the fanfiction world is much easier for you to love than it is for me.

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