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Mystery and Misery

Apr 13, 2008 14:02

Title: Mystery and Misery
Author: spillalltheink
Pairing: Adam/John
Rating: R. There's nothing too explicit.
Disclaimer: This isn't real in any way.
Summary: John likes to wear women's lingerie. Yeah, that's about it.
Notes: This is ridiculous. It takes place sometime around 2001. There may be some mistakes, I fail at proofreading. It is not graphic at all. It ( Read more... )

Comments 2

wattle_neurotic April 21 2008, 12:45:43 UTC

Wow, I really liked reading this. In an 'I actually feel embarrassed right now' sort of way *lol* I don't read cross dressing fics that often, but I thought I'd branch out today (I'm also catching up with a few comm's, hence why I'm so late :/)

I thought you got John and Adam (if there was a John and Adam :P) down to a tee, the awkwardness and angsty but not sort of undertones were great (I'm making no sense, apologies).

do_come_in July 26 2008, 12:36:57 UTC

I'm sorry. I'm not meant to be laughing, but I really am. It was well-written and made sense and it's just quite funny in my eyes.

It was a good cross-dressing fic, I like the way that you took the progression of John's festish through his life and also the way that Adam saw it. Their relationship wasn't solid, but that's good, because no relationship is. It's nice to see a realistic fic.