Summer Loving [Nao X Tora] Oneshot

[takekou]

Summer Loving

Chapter 1 (Oneshot)

Pairing(s): Nao x Tora

Rating: NC-17

Warnings: mature male on male action

Genre: Romance

Disclaimer: I do not own Nao or Tora (though I wish with all my heart) though I do own the idea for the fanfic so please no taking without my permission.

Synopsis: Summer Love blossoms

Comments

[cherrylng]

*headdesks repeatedly* Fuck.... that was good... I needed a fic like that for a while *^*

Although from reading all of it, there were quite some mistakes here and there. I would recommend you can reread it and correct it, or maybe the next time you made a fic, get a beta reader to do so ^^;

It was painfully, hurt like a bitch but that soon all changed into pleasure that he had never once experienced.
You should change painfully to just painful. :3

There are some more, but I think you got the message :3

LOVING THIS FIC!!!!

[takekou]

Thank you!!! <3
I wrote this at like... 1am or something like that and I can never write well when
I'm half asleep... >_>
LOL!!
I'll be sure to reread from now on cause II want everyone to experience
my writing fully <3

Thank you so much again!!!~ I'm glad you liked it X3 that makes me extremely happy~
OH!!! Cafekkokure says "HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3"

[cherrylng]

I see, so the next time you'll do your best, ne? ^^
You should sleep soon? xD

Say back to her, "NYAAAAAAAAAAAAAN~ <3"

[takekou]

yeah, next time will be better for sure~
x3

Sure!!~ when you commented she was
"OMG!!!"

[takekou]

hahaha~
Thank you ^^
I'll be writing another one
soon so please look forward to that one

[xcoffee_smilex]

I just came home and I found...this
....

*dies*

[takekou]

hahahahaha~ I'm glad you like it
I seriously found a picture, came up with an
idea and then started writing.

I love writing smut so... XD
I'm glad you enjoyed as well~

[xcoffee_smilex]

WHERE'S THE PICTURE?!

[takekou]

Cafekkokure has the picture since she was the one who originally
requested it
so she'll have to email it to you

[erikaoi]

Thats hawt..

[takekou]

Thank you ^^
More to come soon

[skittypoohbear]

Oh My Fucking GOD!~ Do you know how LONG i've been searching for some Tora x Nao~

*blushes* Very Sexy~ I expect to see more from you~

[takekou]

hahaha~ I'm glad you liked it xD

I'll be sure to post some more soon~ I've been having temporary writers
block so right now I'm shuffling ideas~
<3