no longer will i wonder..

Jun 03, 2003 02:45

and you overwhelmed me with...
"thanks."

truly took the knife out of me.
licked it clean.
and smiled at the reflection.

i just might need you back.

here i go, once more with this smoking idea.
kill me quicker.
and i asked you to do that once.

i really just might..but who reads these ( Read more... )

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DAMN sup3rman83 June 3 2003, 07:15:35 UTC
Holy Shit, man your words are straight off the hook, Nick. Honestly, sometimes the poetry that you present is golden, just fuckin straight. Not that other times it isn't good, but quite a few times, I've been reading and been like yea yea I know, I'm feelin it. So if no one ever tells you that shit is money, well I am and who the hell am I..lol...well I'm fucking just another high school graduate lol well a year ago anyways, so I guess I'm not a professional, but who really cares about the real critics, what do they know. Ait well I'll catch you later...oh and add me to your damn list already..motherfucker honestly..lol..ait im out..later

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Re: DAMN takemythroat June 3 2003, 14:03:39 UTC
wow..
i didnt think you liked it that much..

thanks a ton neilio..
=)

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iwantamullet June 3 2003, 11:19:41 UTC
stop saying goodbye.
I need more hello(s) from you.
<3

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