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[takentonowhere]

Hey, I'd like to thank everyone who's commented on my first Song, I appreciate it alot... I came up with this one at like 1:30 yesterday night, but I have been playing with some of these lyrics for awhile, it's nowhere near a finished project, but I'm posting it anyway. Please comment, and tell me what your thinking

Comments

[theburialplot]

"But I'll dream the sweet dreams..."

very cool line. i like what you do a lot, keep it up.
girls are mean.

[anonymous]

MmM! YaY! first one to comment! :-) Love The Lyrics, Super Hot I Must Say. Keep It Up. Become Famous and Let Them All Know I Was The First To Comment :-D

[anonymous]

beautiful job....not as corny lol there i left a comment!!!

[sugahillgang]

You told me you'd give me something to make fun of, and I'd love to say you've done just that but you haven't. This one was better than the last. To me, the last one just kinda of rhymed a lot, and didn't exactly have much meaning to it. But thats just me, and what I think. Don't cry though, you told me to be mean. As far as this one goes....well job well done Don. If you keep getting better at this rate, you'll be amazing soon.

Yours Truly-
Kelly Marie Fronczak

[anonymous]

Beautiful!=)
-Jillian Marie

[anonymous]

Don,
those words are so inspirational.
-Alyssa

[anonymous]

Don, your a very talented boy. Your Welcome.