Comments | takethehouse: Fic: Enjoy the Show (Linus, Danny/Rusty)

musesfool in takethehouse

Fic: Enjoy the Show (Linus, Danny/Rusty)

Jun 07, 2005 15:44

Title: Enjoy the Show
Author: victoria p. [victoria @ unfitforsociety.net]
Summary: Linus doesn't have to imagine now. Now he can watch.
Rating: Adult
Disclaimer: Sadly, not mine.
Archive: Achromatic, Criminal Record
Feedback: Always welcome and more appreciated than you know.
Notes: Written for chicklet_girl in the takethehouse ficathon. I combined two requests, kind of: ( Read more... )

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Comments 28

wildestranger June 7 2005, 20:00:33 UTC

The summary is just. Well. Wouldn't we all like to watch Danny and Rusty. *g*

And the way he does watch, and the way they play with him? I'm thinking maybe I should watch that film again. This is most delightful.

musesfool June 10 2005, 16:19:35 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

Wouldn't we all like to watch Danny and Rusty

For real! I totally would. *g*

movies_michelle June 7 2005, 20:04:48 UTC

I so need to watch the movie again. There have just been too many good stories on this community!

I loved this. Poor Linus. He'd just be too much fun to torment. Especially if you got to have sex and torment him at the same time. (I also wonder if they set the REAL security cameras to see something else before they left, or did they also give Benedict--or at least his security team--a thrill, as well.)

musesfool June 10 2005, 16:21:54 UTC

Thanks so much!

And I'm so glad you're enjoying the stories. The challenge did produce some really good stuff, didn't it?

He'd just be too much fun to torment. Especially if you got to have sex and torment him at the same time.

Oh, totally. Because you know he just plays it over and over again in his head.

I also wonder if they set the REAL security cameras to see something else before they left, or did they also give Benedict--or at least his security team--a thrill, as well

Heh. I bet Danny had a non-X-rated tape prepared for casino security. He seems to be on top of those kinds of things. *g* And if he didn't, Rusty would.

windsorblue June 7 2005, 20:53:39 UTC

*brain melts* I just love your Linus. He's dead-on perfect.

musesfool June 10 2005, 16:22:20 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you thought he was in character.

tinylegacies June 7 2005, 22:30:18 UTC

This is the most amazing fic ever.

I loved the entire concept and I am mega jealous because I've always wanted to fool around in an elevator!

musesfool June 10 2005, 16:23:49 UTC

Hee! Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it.

chicklet_girl June 8 2005, 00:37:30 UTC

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

Ahem. Okay. Actual words, now? I'll give it a shot.

Holy fucking shit. Or how about -- oh. Coherence? You want coherence? Okay.

Absolutely stunning. I love it when Danny and Rusty fuck around with Linus, because a), it's so easy, and b), he gets so hilariously pissed about it. It's like fraternity hazing, only the homoeroticism *isn't* suppressed. And of course, the whole time Danny and Rusty were in the elevator, I'm thinking, Jesus, Linus, you know better. You *know* they know you're watching, you cute little idiot. And the payoff was spectacular.

And my favorite lines:

He'd known about them -- you couldn't spend an hour with them and not, not if you were smarter than the average houseplant, or Turk Malloy, at least -- but he hadn't really known.

Heh. Turk Malloy. The sad part? I truly believe Virgil is just a tad smarter than Turk.

Rusty's hands were clenching in Danny's short hair, and Linus had watched porn often enough to know that he was about to come.I love that Linus ( ... )

musesfool June 10 2005, 16:36:38 UTC

Whew. I'm sorry you had to wait, but I'm so glad you like the end result.

Thank you!

I love it when Danny and Rusty fuck around with Linus, because a), it's so easy, and b), he gets so hilariously pissed about it.

And he always walks right into it. /pets clueless!Linus

It's like fraternity hazing, only the homoeroticism *isn't* suppressed.

Hee!

Jesus, Linus, you know better. You *know* they know you're watching, you cute little idiot. And the payoff was spectacular.

Yeah, Linus was clearly letting the little head do his thinking for him here. But can you blame him? *g*

The sad part? I truly believe Virgil is just a tad smarter than Turk.

Virgil's slightly smarter, but Turk is more sensitive to other people's feelings. Well, "more sensitive" being a relative thing there. *G*

I love that Linus thinks in terms of what he's seen in porn, not the signals he himself gives when he's about to come. Nice detail! Thank you ( ... )